Cakes— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且直接，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

例: Yes, I like to eat cakes, especially cheesecakes, because they are very creamy and delicious. In addition, I enjoy their smooth texture which makes them irresistible.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时补充更多关于月饼的描述。

例: Yes, there is a traditional Chinese cake called the moon cake. We usually eat it during the Mid Autumn Festival because it symbolizes reunion and happiness.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，且表达不够连贯。建议注意语法和拼写，使用连接词，并详细描述制作过程。

例: Yes, I am good at baking, so I like to make cheesecakes by myself. First, I mix cheese and flour, then I put the mixture into the oven and wait for it to bake until it's delicious.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并补充更多细节。

例: Yes, when I was young, I always got a cheesecake as a reward for helping my mother with the housework, which made me feel very happy.

提案: 回答较自然，但可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I usually drink a cup of yogurt after lunch to help with digestion, or sometimes I eat some sweet candies as a treat.

× Yes, there is a kind of traditional Chinese cakes called the moon cake.

✓ Yes, there is a kind of traditional Chinese cake called the moon cake.

这里的主语是单数形式的"a kind of"，后面的名词应使用单数形式，因此"cakes"应改为"cake"。

× I like make cheesecakes by myself.

✓ I like to make cheesecakes by myself.

动词"like"后面应接不定式"to make"，而不是直接接动词原形。

× you just need to put the mixture of cheese and flour into the own and then you wait for the delicious cheesecake.

✓ you just need to put the mixture of cheese and flour into the oven and then you wait for the delicious cheesecake.

单词"own"是错误的，应为"oven"（烤箱），这是拼写错误，不属于语法错误，但影响理解。

× Yes, when I was young I always gotta cheesecake as a reward for helping my mother to do the housework.

✓ Yes, when I was young I always got a cheesecake as a reward for helping my mother to do the housework.

"gotta"是口语缩写，正式书面语应为"got a"，且过去时态"got"正确，需分开写。

× helping my mother to do the housework.

✓ helping my mother do the housework.

动词"help"后面接动词时，通常省略"to"，直接用动词原形。