Coins— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达重复且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

例: No, I don't use coins anymore because I usually pay with my phone.

提案: 回答简短且缺乏细节。建议增加具体原因，使回答更丰富和有说服力。

例: No, I don't think using coins is convenient because they are heavy and easy to lose.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子清楚说明是否收藏过硬币，并给出具体原因。

例: Yes, I collected coins as a kid because I used them to buy candy.

提案: 回答语法错误多，表达不连贯。建议用正确时态和连贯句子表达过去和现在的不同习惯。

例: When I was young, I carried coins to use public transport. But now, I pay with apps on my phone.

× No, no, I don't use some coins because we can buy something by phone.

✓ No, no, I don't use coins because we can buy things by phone.

这里'some coins'用法不当，'some'通常用于肯定句，否定句中应直接用复数名词'coins'。另外，'something'应改为复数形式'things'，因为表示泛指多样的物品。

× Yes, because when was the case I will I will use the calls to buy some candy to eat.

✓ Yes, because when I was a kid, I used coins to buy some candy to eat.

句中时态混乱，'when was the case'不合适，应为'when I was a kid'表示过去时间；'I will I will use'重复且时态错误，过去时应使用'used'。

× When was young I will carry it because I will.

✓ When I was young, I carried it because I needed it.

'When was young'缺少主语，应为'When I was young'；'I will carry'时态错误，描述过去应使用过去时'carried'。

× If I want to try use public transport I will.

✓ If I wanted to try using public transport, I would.

条件句中时态和语气不正确，虚拟语气应使用过去时'wanted'和'would'，'try use'应改为'try using'。

× I need the coin but now I have the phone so I don't need it.

✓ I needed coins, but now I have a phone so I don't need them.

前半句描述过去应使用过去时'needed'，'coin'应为复数'coins'，后半句中'phone'前应加不定冠词'a'，'it'指代复数应改为'them'。

× I will pay it on my phone apps.

✓ I pay for it using my phone apps now.

'pay it on'用法错误，正确表达应为'pay for it using'，且时态应与现在情况一致。