Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามและหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้ประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์หรือสับสน เช่น การใช้คำว่า "only a few people" ควรแยกประโยคให้ชัดเจนและเพิ่มรายละเอียดเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

例: No, fishing is not very popular in my country. Only a small number of people enjoy it, mostly those who live near rivers or lakes.

提案: คำตอบของคุณมีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ ควรฝึกพูดให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และมีความหมายชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหล

例: Yes, I like eating fish. My mother taught me that fish is very nutritious and a healthy alternative for people who don't like chicken or beef.

提案: คำตอบควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ Present Perfect อย่างถูกต้อง และการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน

例: Yes, I have been to the fish market. I usually go there with my family to buy ingredients for cooking dinner.

提案: คำตอบมีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดในการใช้คำและไวยากรณ์ ควรฝึกพูดให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงเชื่อมโยงความคิดให้ลื่นไหลและเข้าใจง่าย

例: No, fishing is not very popular in my country. Most Thai people prefer outdoor activities. However, those who live near rivers enjoy fishing because it is easy to find fish there.

× No, it isn't only a few people in my country who love fishing.

✓ No, only a few people in my country love fishing.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure due to the misplaced 'isn't'. The phrase 'No, it isn't only a few people' is confusing and ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'No, only a few people in my country love fishing.' which clearly negates the popularity of fishing.

× Yes I do. When I was a kid my mom away taught me that fish have.

✓ Yes, I do. When I was a kid, my mom taught me that fish have many nutrients.

The phrase 'my mom away taught me' is incorrect; 'away' is misplaced and unnecessary. Also, the sentence is incomplete. The past tense 'taught' is correct, but the sentence needs completion for clarity. Added 'many nutrients' to complete the thought.

× Many years through nutrition and I think fish is.

✓ Over many years, I have learned about nutrition, and I think fish is healthy.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clear structure. 'Many years through nutrition' is unclear. The correction provides a clearer, complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× An other option for people who don't like She can meet or beef.

✓ It is another option for people who don't like chicken or beef.

The phrase 'She can meet or beef' is incorrect and confusing. Likely intended 'chicken or beef'. Also, 'An other' should be 'Another'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the article usage.

× Yes, I ever have been to fish market.

✓ Yes, I have been to the fish market.

The word 'ever' is incorrectly used here. The correct present perfect form is 'I have been to the fish market.' 'Ever' is generally used in questions or negative sentences, not affirmative statements.

× I go with my family to searching our ingredient for making a dinner meal.

✓ I go with my family to search for ingredients to make a dinner meal.

The verb 'searching' should be in the base form 'search' after 'to'. Also, 'ingredient' should be plural 'ingredients'. The preposition 'for' is needed after 'search'. The phrase 'for making a dinner meal' is better expressed as 'to make a dinner meal'.

× No it isn't. I think the majority of Thai people like to play outdoor activity more than reaching only a fill.

✓ No, it isn't. I think the majority of Thai people like to do outdoor activities more than fishing.

The phrase 'reaching only a fill' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended 'fishing'. Also, 'play outdoor activity' should be 'do outdoor activities'. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× People in Thai who like. Fishing. Is because they live near deliver.

✓ People in Thailand who like fishing do so because they live near rivers.

'People in Thai' should be 'People in Thailand'. 'Is because' should be 'do so because'. 'Deliver' is likely a misspelling of 'river'. The correction fixes these errors and improves sentence flow.

× Anne. It's good to find.

✓ It is good to find fish there.

The sentence fragments 'Anne.' and 'It's good to find.' are unclear and incomplete. Likely intended to say 'There, it's good to find fish.' The correction completes the thought and corrects sentence structure.