Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有语法错误，如“Mens”应为“men”，“love to fishing”应为“love to fish”。建议注意动词不定式的正确用法和名词复数形式。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅。

例: Yes, fishing is very popular in China, especially among middle-aged men. After they retire, they often enjoy fishing in the mountains as a way to relax.

提案: 回答较自然，但表达略显重复，如“really delicious and also nutritious ingredient”可以更简洁。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

例: Yes, I enjoy eating fish because it is both tasty and nutritious. For example, steaming fish with a little soy sauce brings out its natural flavor.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“me and my parents”应为“My parents and I”，“we cooked”应为“we cook”。句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I have been to the fish market. During summer holidays, my parents and I often go there to buy fresh fish because it is cheaper than eating at restaurants. Then, we cook the fish together at home.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如“far away from the”后面缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，同时避免重复回答同一问题。

例: Yes, fishing is quite popular in China, especially among middle-aged men. After retirement, they often go fishing in the mountains to relax and relieve stress.

× Yes, fishing is really popular in China especially in those middle-aged Mens group.

✓ Yes, fishing is really popular in China especially in those middle-aged men's groups.

Mens 是复数形式的错误拼写，正确的复数形式是 men，且这里需要所有格 men's 来表示“中年男人的群体”。另外，group 应该用复数形式 groups，因为指的是多个群体。

× After those men retired they always love to fishing in the mountains.

✓ After those men retired, they always love fishing in the mountains.

动词 love 后面接动名词形式 fishing，而不是不定式 to fishing。

× Even you just steam the fish without putting anything, just a little bit soya sauce, it would be really delicious.

✓ Even if you just steam the fish without putting anything, just a little bit of soy sauce, it would be really delicious.

句子缺少连词 even if 来引导条件状语从句，soya sauce 前面需要加介词 of 表示“一点点酱油”。

× When the summer holiday comes, me and my parents always go to the fish market to buy fish and we cooked in our home together because it's really expensive in restaurants.

✓ When the summer holiday comes, my parents and I always go to the fish market to buy fish and we cook at home together because it's really expensive in restaurants.

主语中人称代词顺序应为“my parents and I”，而不是“me and my parents”；cook 应用一般现在时 cook 来与前半句时态一致；in our home 应改为 at home。

× But if you buy that in fish market, it will be much cheaper.

✓ But if you buy that at the fish market, it will be much cheaper.

表示地点时，fish market 前应加定冠词 the，且介词应为 at 而不是 in。

× Yes, fishing is really popular in China, especially among those mid aged men.

✓ Yes, fishing is really popular in China, especially among those middle-aged men.

mid aged 应写作 middle-aged，作为复合形容词修饰 men。

× After they retired, they always love to go fishing together in the mountains.

✓ After they retired, they always love going fishing together in the mountains.

love 后面接动名词 going fishing 更自然，表示喜欢做某事。

× Maybe that's a good way to release their stress and far away from the.

✓ Maybe that's a good way to relieve their stress and get far away from it.

release their stress 用词不当，应为 relieve their stress；句子后半部分缺少谓语动词和宾语，补充 get far away from it 使句子完整。