Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中出现了词汇错误（将fishing误说成fashion），且句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意发音和词汇的准确性，回答时要直接回应问题，并用简洁的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, fishing is very popular in my country, especially among older people who have more free time to enjoy this relaxing activity.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，且用词不当（spoons应为bones）。建议加强语法练习，使用正确的词汇，并用简洁的句子表达个人喜好和原因。

例: Actually, I rarely eat fish because it has many bones, which sometimes get stuck in my throat and make me feel uncomfortable.

提案: 回答较为完整，表达清晰，但句子结构较简单，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have been to a seafood market, which is similar to a fish market. There are many kinds of seafood, including various types of fish, so you can choose whatever you like.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达重复问题，句子不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

例: Definitely, fishing is popular in my country because it helps people relax and enjoy fresh air, which makes them feel refreshed and energetic.

× Actually I seldom eating fish because fish have many spoons at they stuck in my throat that's make me feel uncomfortable and painful so I don't like fish.

✓ Actually I seldom eat fish because fish have many spines that get stuck in my throat, which makes me feel uncomfortable and painful, so I don't like fish.

这里'seldom'后面应该接动词原形，不能用动名词形式'eating'。此外，'spoons'应为'spines'（鱼刺），'at they stuck'应改为'that get stuck'，使句子语法正确且表达清晰。

× Actually I seldom eating fish because fish have many spoons at they stuck in my throat that's make me feel uncomfortable and painful so I don't like fish.

✓ Actually I seldom eat fish because fish have many spines that get stuck in my throat, which makes me feel uncomfortable and painful, so I don't like fish.

'spoons'应为复数形式的'spines'，表示鱼刺。'that's make'应为单数形式'makes'，因为主语是单数的'which'。

× They didn't to, they don't go to work for survive, they have more time so.

✓ They didn't have to; they don't go to work to survive, so they have more time.

'didn't to'是不正确的表达，应该是'didn't have to'表示过去不需要。'for survive'应改为'to survive'，不定式用法。

× Definitely, fashion is really popular in my country because it's a good choice for relax or time consuming, especially for elder people.

✓ Definitely, fishing is really popular in my country because it's a good choice for relaxation or time consumption, especially for elderly people.

'for relax'应改为'for relaxation'，名词形式。'time consuming'通常作形容词，名词应为'time consumption'。'elder'应为形容词'elderly'。

× Fishing is a good way to relax and from this activity you can got a fresh air breathing fresh air and energize your energetic energy yourself.

✓ Fishing is a good way to relax, and from this activity you can get fresh air, breathe fresh air, and energize yourself.

'can got'应为'can get'，情态动词后接动词原形。'breathing fresh air'应改为'breathe fresh air'，动词原形。'energize your energetic energy yourself'表达重复且不自然，简化为'energize yourself'。