Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢吃鱼的观点，但存在语法错误和重复用词，如“taste tastes tasty and delicious”。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy eating fish, especially at dinner, because it tastes delicious and is healthy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和逻辑不清，如“really went to the fish market”表达不准确，且句子不连贯。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: To be honest, I rarely go to the fish market because I'm not good at cooking fish and can't tell which fish is fresh.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“Much of them most of them are retired”，“its own habit for their make”等。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Of course, fishing is very popular in my country, especially among elderly people. Most of them are retired and enjoy fishing as a relaxing hobby.

× I think it's taste tastes tasty and delicious.

✓ I think it tastes tasty and delicious.

这里动词'taste'需要用第三人称单数形式'tastes'，因为主语是it。原句中多余的'it's'导致语法错误。建议去掉'it's'，直接用'tastes'。

× I think I can't distinguish which fish is fresh, so I really went there.

✓ I think I can't distinguish which fish is fresh, so I really go there.

句子中表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'go'，而不是过去时'went'。

× To be honest, I really went to the fish market.

✓ To be honest, I have really been to the fish market.

这里表达经历时，应该用现在完成时'have been'，而不是简单过去时'went'。

× especially in elder people.

✓ especially among elderly people.

'in elder people'用法不正确，应该用'among'表示在某群体中，且'elder'应改为形容词'elderly'。

× Much of them most of them are retired, so they have many time to fish its own habit for their make, which makes them feel relaxed.

✓ Most of them are retired, so they have much time to fish as their own habit, which makes them feel relaxed.

'Much of them'应改为'Most of them'，'many time'应为'much time'，'its own habit for their make'表达不清，改为'as their own habit'更合适。