Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "provide me a good taste in my tongue"; instead, say "taste good". Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy eating fish because it is rich in vitamin D and iodine, which are good for health. Moreover, fish tastes delicious and can be prepared in many ways, making it a favourite of mine.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say "a few times" instead of "few times". Also, improve coherence by using linking words like "however" correctly and avoid redundancy. Try to be more specific about your experience.

例: Yes, I have been to the fish market a few times. It offers a wide variety of fresh fish to choose from. However, I find it inconvenient that they only accept cash, so I always have to carry coins with me.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid ending sentences abruptly. Also, try to explain your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain why fishing contradicts the emphasis on cost-effectiveness.

例: I don't think fishing is very popular in my country because people usually focus on cost-effectiveness. However, fishing can be time-consuming, which makes it less appealing to many.

× Yes, I've been to the fish market few times.

✓ Yes, I've been to the fish market a few times.

The phrase 'few times' without an article implies a small number and often a negative meaning. To express a positive small number, 'a few times' should be used. This is a quantifier usage error.

× However, only cash is accepted as the only payment method is quite inconvenient to take many coins to there.

✓ However, only cash is accepted as the payment method, so it is quite inconvenient to take many coins there.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition usage and awkward structure. 'To there' is incorrect; 'there' alone suffices. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity.

× it can also provide me a good taste in my tongue.

✓ it can also provide me with a good taste on my tongue.

The phrase 'a good taste in my tongue' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' the tongue, and 'provide me with' is the correct verb phrase. This is a quantifier and preposition usage issue.

× people in the country emphasize cost effectiveness.

✓ people in the country emphasize cost-effectiveness.

'Cost effectiveness' should be hyphenated as 'cost-effectiveness' to function correctly as a compound noun. This is a minor issue related to word formation rather than pluralization, but it affects clarity.

× But fishing is a quite contradicting example because it requires us to spend large amount of time due.

✓ But fishing is quite a contradictory example because it requires us to spend a large amount of time.

The sentence has word order and word choice errors. 'A quite contradicting example' should be 'quite a contradictory example'. Also, 'large amount of time due' is incomplete and incorrect; 'a large amount of time' is correct, and 'due' is unnecessary here.