Fishing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장 구조와 문법을 다듬어 자연스럽게 답하세요. 예를 들어 ‘prefer to eat fish than meats’는 문법적으로 틀립니다. 또한 주제문 뒤에 짧은 이유와 구체적인 예시(어떤 생선이나 요리)를 덧붙여야 더 설득력 있습니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어보세요.

例: Yes, I enjoy eating fish. I prefer it to meat because I find it lighter and fresher, especially sushi and sashimi made with tuna or salmon.

提案: 과거 경험을 말할 때 시제와 어순을 정확히 하세요. 또한 왜 자주 갔는지에 대해 더 구체적인 상황(누가 데려갔는지, 어떤 분위기였는지)을 추가하면 좋습니다. 연결어(so, because)와 시간 표현(w hen I was young, often)을 자연스럽게 사용하세요.

例: Yes, I used to visit the fish market frequently when I was young because my parents loved fresh seafood, and we would buy fish together for family meals.

提案: 질문을 정확히 이해하고 직접적으로 답하세요. 'fishing'과 'fish'를 혼동하지 마세요. 주제문으로 의견을 밝힌 뒤 이유를 논리적으로 이어가야 합니다. 또한 문법(주어-동사 일치)과 어휘 선택(‘active things’ 대신 ‘active pursuits’ 등)을 개선하고, 연결어(although, because, however)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

例: I don't think fishing is very popular in Korea. People generally prefer more active pursuits like hiking or team sports, whereas fishing is seen as a quiet, relaxing hobby enjoyed by a smaller group.

× I like eating fish, and I also prefer to eat fish than meats because I love to eat sushi and sashimi.

✓ I like eating fish, and I also prefer to eat fish to meat because I love to eat sushi and sashimi.

You used 'prefer ... than' which is incorrect for comparisons. Use 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer A over B'. Also 'meats' is usually uncountable or 'meat' as a general category. Suggestion: say 'prefer fish to meat' or 'prefer fish over meat.' Grammar problem type ID: 19

× Yes, when I was young I went to the fish market often because I like to eat fish and my parents also like to eat.

✓ Yes, when I was young I often went to the fish market because I liked to eat fish and my parents also liked to eat fish.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses. Since the time frame is 'when I was young,' use past tense consistently: 'went' and 'liked.' Also the final clause 'my parents also like to eat' is missing the object 'fish' and should match past tense. Suggestion: keep verbs in simple past and repeat the object if needed. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I think fish is not popular in my country because Korean are most likely to something. Active things, but fishing is relaxing activity.

✓ I think fish is not very popular in my country because Koreans prefer more active activities, while fishing is a relaxing activity.

Several issues: 'Korean are most likely to something' is ungrammatical and missing meaning. Use plural noun 'Koreans.' Combine ideas into one coherent contrast: 'prefer more active activities' and 'while fishing is a relaxing activity.' Also add articles: 'a relaxing activity.' Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure and link clauses with 'while' or 'but.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I think fish is not popular in my country because Korean are most likely to something.

✓ I think fish is not popular in my country because Koreans are more likely to prefer other activities.

Use plural 'Koreans' for people from Korea. 'Fish' can remain singular as an uncountable noun for the concept, but the subject referring to people must be plural. Also clarify 'more likely to prefer other activities' rather than the vague 'most likely to something.' Suggestion: ensure noun number agreement and complete the verb phrase. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Active things, but fishing is relaxing activity.

✓ They prefer active activities, but fishing is a relaxing activity.

'Active things' is informal and awkward; use the noun 'activities.' Also 'relaxing activity' needs an article 'a.' The sentence also lacked a clear subject, so add 'They prefer' or restructure to contrast properly. Suggestion: use precise nouns and include articles where necessary. Grammar problem type ID: 17