Laughing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达的意思不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议用更自然的表达方式，并且避免语法错误。可以先直接回答问题，再用具体例子或解释来支持观点。

例: Laughter is an important part of daily life because it helps people feel happy and relaxed. For example, when I watch a funny video, I often laugh and feel less stressed.

提案: 回答有些冗长且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: I laugh quite often. The last time was last night when I watched a comedy TV show with my family. The show had a funny and interesting plot, so we all enjoyed it together.

提案: 回答结构较好，但表达可以更自然，避免重复和语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I can make my friends and family laugh because we know each other well and understand each other's humor. However, it's harder to make colleagues or strangers laugh because we are less familiar.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

例: Yes, I really enjoy watching funny movies because they help me relax and forget about my problems. They are like a form of therapy for me.

× We can see sometimes fake smile as an emoji to express our embarrassing, but most of the time laughter means fun and humor.

✓ We can sometimes see fake smiles as emojis to express our embarrassment, but most of the time laughter means fun and humor.

这里“fake smile”和“emoji”应使用复数形式，因为表示的是泛指的多个假笑和表情符号。并且“embarrassing”应改为名词“embarrassment”，表示“尴尬”的状态。

× I laugh very often and the last time I laugh maybe last night watching a a comedy TV program with my families.

✓ I laugh very often and the last time I laughed was maybe last night watching a comedy TV program with my family.

“the last time”表示过去的时间，动词应使用过去时“laughed”。“families”应为单数“family”，表示家庭成员。

× It is filled with fun and interesting plot that we have fun together.

✓ It is filled with fun and an interesting plot so that we have fun together.

“plot”是可数名词，前面应加不定冠词“an”。另外，句子连接词用“so that”更合适，表达因果关系。

× I could make my friends or my family laugh as we know each other better and without any misunderstanding.

✓ I can make my friends or my family laugh as we know each other better and without any misunderstanding.

这里表达现在能力，应该用情态动词“can”而非“could”，后者表示过去或假设。

× While faced with colleagues or strangers, it is hard for me to make others laugh.

✓ When faced with colleagues or strangers, it is hard for me to make others laugh.

“While faced with”用法不当，应改为“When faced with”，表示“当面对……时”。

× Yes, I can say that I am addicted to funny movies and they are spiritual healing for me to relieve my stress and forget anything not happy and and make.

✓ Yes, I can say that I am addicted to funny movies, and they are spiritual healing for me to relieve my stress and forget anything unhappy.

句子中“and and make”重复且无意义，应删除。形容词“not happy”应改为“unhappy”。另外，两个分句之间应加逗号。