Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法不正确，表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确描述道路的繁忙情况。

例: The roads in my area are quite busy because of the large population, which often causes traffic jams.

提案: 回答较完整，但句子结构和用词有待改进，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, many people cross the roads in my city because there are numerous stores and shopping malls along the streets. Therefore, pedestrians need to cross the road to reach their destinations, and they usually follow the traffic signals.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简洁明了地描述道路状况。

例: I live in a new city built about 10 years ago, so the roads and infrastructure are of high quality and well maintained.

提案: 回答表达不够准确，建议使用正确的词汇和语法，并具体说明改进措施。

例: I hope the government can expand the sidewalks and adjust the traffic signals to give pedestrians more time to cross the roads safely.

× The road is in my vicinity, are quieter, busy due to the large population and always cause traffic jams.

✓ The roads in my vicinity are quieter, but busy due to the large population and always cause traffic jams.

原句中“The road is in my vicinity, are quieter”存在单复数不一致问题。road是单数，后面却用了复数动词are，且句子结构混乱。应将road改为复数形式roads，并调整句子结构，使主谓一致。

× Yes, many people across the road in the city where I live because there are many stores and shopping mall alongside the road.

✓ Yes, many people cross the road in the city where I live because there are many stores and shopping malls alongside the road.

原句中“many people across the road”中across用错，应为动词cross，表示“穿过”。另外，shopping mall应为复数形式shopping malls，与many stores保持一致。

× I live in the new city which was built about 10 years ago, so the roads and the infrastructure zero were quite high quality and well maintained.

✓ I live in the new city which was built about 10 years ago, so the roads and the infrastructure were of quite high quality and well maintained.

原句中“infrastructure zero”不合适，可能是笔误，应去掉“zero”。infrastructure是不可数名词，前面不加复数形式。

× I live in the new city which was built about 10 years ago, so the roads and the infrastructure zero were quite high quality and well maintained.

✓ I live in the new city which was built about 10 years ago, so the roads and the infrastructure were of quite high quality and well maintained.

原句中“high quality”作为形容词短语修饰名词时，通常用“of high quality”结构，缺少介词of，导致表达不准确。

× I hope the government can expand the sidewalk and adjuster the traffical signal to leave the pedestrians more time to cross the road.

✓ I hope the government can expand the sidewalk and adjust the traffic signals to give pedestrians more time to cross the road.

原句中“adjuster”应为动词“adjust”，且“traffical”拼写错误，应为“traffic”。“leave the pedestrians more time”表达不自然，改为“give pedestrians more time”更合适。