Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, the roads in my suburban area are not busy because there are fewer cars and vehicles compared to the city center.

提案: 回答内容不明确，句子结构混乱，缺乏具体信息。建议直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, people often cross the road near our school using two designated pedestrian routes that are used on different school days.

提案: 表达不清楚，语法错误较多，信息不完整。建议用简洁的句子描述道路状况，并说明影响。

例: In Shanghai, the roads are often congested, which makes it difficult to arrive at places on time.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误明显。建议完整表达观点，说明原因并用具体细节支持。

例: Yes, I believe the roads need improvement because the distance between vehicles and pedestrians is too close, which is very dangerous.

× No, it's not because I'm starting a suburbia area, so there's not much, not much cars and in other vehicles and, but, uh, when, when we.

✓ No, it's not because I'm living in a suburban area, so there aren't many cars or other vehicles, but, uh, when, when we...

这里“starting a suburbia area”用词不当，应该用现在进行时表示居住状态，且“suburbia area”应改为“suburban area”。另外，“there's not much, not much cars”中“there's”是单数形式，后面接复数名词cars，应改为“there aren't many cars”。建议用“living in a suburban area”表达居住在郊区的意思。

× No, it's not because I'm starting a suburbia area, so there's not much, not much cars and in other vehicles and, but, uh, when, when we.

✓ No, it's not because I'm living in a suburban area, so there aren't many cars or other vehicles, but, uh, when, when we...

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，表示单数，但后面接复数名词“cars”，应使用“there are”表示复数，改为“there aren't many cars”。

× No, it's not because I'm starting a suburbia area, so there's not much, not much cars and in other vehicles and, but, uh, when, when we.

✓ No, it's not because I'm living in a suburban area, so there aren't many cars or other vehicles, but, uh, when, when we...

“in other vehicles”中的介词“in”用法不当，表示“其他车辆”时应使用“or”连接名词，改为“or other vehicles”。

× No, it's not because I'm starting a suburbia area, so there's not much, not much cars and in other vehicles and, but, uh, when, when we.

✓ No, it's not because I'm living in a suburban area, so there aren't many cars or other vehicles, but, uh, when, when we...

“not much cars”中“much”用于不可数名词，cars是可数名词，应使用“many”表示数量多，改为“not many cars”。

× Yeah, so, so the process rolls around our school just to just have two routes and, uh, they are divided in the different days of our school, which is a nurse and.

✓ Yeah, so the process around our school has just two routes, and they are divided on different days of our school, which is a nurse and...

“the process rolls around our school”表达不清，可能想说“the process around our school has just two routes”，且“divided in the different days”介词用错，应为“divided on different days”。

× Yeah, so, so the process rolls around our school just to just have two routes and, uh, they are divided in the different days of our school, which is a nurse and.

✓ Yeah, so the process around our school has just two routes, and they are divided on different days of our school, which is a nurse and...

“divided in the different days”中介词“in”用法错误，表示“在不同的日子”应使用“on different days”。

× Yeah, so, so the process rolls around our school just to just have two routes and, uh, they are divided in the different days of our school, which is a nurse and.

✓ Yeah, so the process around our school has just two routes, and they are divided on different days of our school, which is a nurse and...

“the process rolls”中“process”是单数，动词应用第三人称单数形式“rolls”，但句意不清，建议改为“the process around our school has just two routes”。

× Sing in Shanghai, the, UM, the generation is really, it's really, it's really hard and it always have a have a harvest congestion is that, so we cannot arrive at some place in time and, uh.

✓ In Shanghai, the traffic is really heavy, and there is always a severe congestion, so we cannot arrive at some places on time.

“Sing in Shanghai”应为“In Shanghai”，“the generation is really hard”表达错误，应为“the traffic is really heavy”；“it always have a have a harvest congestion”主谓不一致，应为“there is always a severe congestion”；“arrive at some place in time”应为“arrive at some places on time”。

× Sing in Shanghai, the, UM, the generation is really, it's really, it's really hard and it always have a have a harvest congestion is that, so we cannot arrive at some place in time and, uh.

✓ In Shanghai, the traffic is really heavy, and there is always severe congestion, so we cannot arrive at some places on time.

“it always have”中主语是单数，动词应为“has”，且句子结构混乱，需调整为“there is always severe congestion”。

× Sing in Shanghai, the, UM, the generation is really, it's really, it's really hard and it always have a have a harvest congestion is that, so we cannot arrive at some place in time and, uh.

✓ In Shanghai, the traffic is really heavy, and there is always severe congestion, so we cannot arrive at some places on time.

“really hard”用词不当，描述交通拥堵应使用“heavy”或“severe”；“harvest congestion”应为“heavy congestion”或“severe congestion”。

× Should should be improved such as I think the distance of the vehicles and pedestrians is very close and I think it's very different dangerous if I if.

✓ It should be improved because I think the distance between vehicles and pedestrians is very close, and I think it's very dangerous.

“Should should be improved”重复且缺少主语，应为“It should be improved”；“very different dangerous”表达错误，应为“very dangerous”；句子结构不完整，需简化并补充完整。