Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy, such as repeating 'to' and 'by their'. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, the roads in my area are usually busy, especially during peak hours like 5 to 7 PM and 8 to 10 AM, when many people commute to work.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific reasons or examples. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, many people cross roads without traffic lights or zebra crossings, which is dangerous because there are not enough crosswalks in my area.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and repetition ('are are'). Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to contrast conditions effectively.

例: The roads in my city are well maintained since it is a popular city, but the roads leading to remote areas are in poor condition.

提案: Your answer contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy ('very are generally very good', 'al always a space of for improvement'). Try to simplify your sentences and use linking words correctly to express contrast and suggestions.

例: Although the roads in my area are generally good, there is always room for improvement. For example, adding more traffic lights and roundabouts could help reduce congestion.

× Yes, generally the roads in my area are very busy, especially during the peak hours like 5:00 PM to 7:00 PM and also in the morning from 8:00 AM to 10:00 PM when people tend to go to their work by their.

✓ Yes, generally the roads in my area are very busy, especially during the peak hours like 5:00 PM to 7:00 PM and also in the morning from 8:00 AM to 10:00 AM when people tend to go to their work by themselves.

The phrase 'by their' is incorrect because 'their' is a possessive pronoun and cannot stand alone here. The correct reflexive pronoun 'themselves' should be used to indicate that people go to work on their own. Also, the time '10:00 PM' is likely a mistake and should be '10:00 AM' to match morning hours.

× Yes, a lot of people tend to cross the roads without any traffic lights or zebra crossing, which is very dangerous. I think people do this because there is a lack of crosswalks in my area and.

✓ Yes, a lot of people tend to cross the roads without any traffic lights or zebra crossings, which is very dangerous. I think people do this because there is a lack of crosswalks in my area.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which creates an incomplete sentence. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly. Also, 'zebra crossing' should be plural 'zebra crossings' to match 'traffic lights' and the plural noun 'roads'.

× The roads in my city are are well maintained because I live in a very popular city in India but the roads to remote areas are not in very well condition in my country.

✓ The roads in my city are well maintained because I live in a very popular city in India, but the roads to remote areas are not in very good condition in my country.

The phrase 'are are' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'are'. Also, 'not in very well condition' is incorrect; the adjective 'well' should be replaced with 'good' to correctly describe the noun 'condition'. A comma is added before 'but' to separate the clauses.

× Although the roads in my area are very are generally very good, but there is al always a space of for improvement.

✓ Although the roads in my area are generally very good, there is always space for improvement.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'Although' and 'but' together, which is redundant. One should be removed. Also, 'are very are generally very good' contains repetition and should be simplified to 'are generally very good'. The phrase 'al always a space of for improvement' contains typos and extra words; it should be 'always space for improvement'.

× I think there can be more red lights and roundabouts in my area to solve the problem of congestion of traffic.

✓ I think there can be more traffic lights and roundabouts in my area to solve the problem of traffic congestion.

'Red lights' is less commonly used than 'traffic lights' when referring to signals controlling traffic. Also, 'congestion of traffic' is better expressed as 'traffic congestion' for natural phrasing.