Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构不完整。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, the roads in my area are very busy because there are nearly 20 subway stations and many office buildings, which attract a large number of people.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, people often cross the roads in my city because there are many streets and pedestrian crossings to help them cross safely.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，且用词不准确。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述道路状况，并避免模糊表达。

例: The roads in my city are well-maintained and organized, unlike the chaotic roads in Beijing.

提案: 回答表达不清，语法错误较多，且用词不当。建议使用更准确的词汇，结构清晰，具体说明改进措施。

例: Yes, I think the roads could be improved. For instance, bike lanes and pedestrian paths should be widened because they get very crowded during peak hours.

× Yes, there are definitely busy and crowded in my area because there are almost 20 subway stations here and lots of buildings for work so there are large amounts of people.

✓ Yes, it is definitely busy and crowded in my area because there are almost 20 subway stations here and lots of buildings for work, so there are large amounts of people.

句子中主语是单数的“it”，但用了复数形式“are”，应使用单数形式“is”。这里的“it”指代“the area”，所以用“it is”。

× Yes, people cross the road in my city as.

✓ Yes, people cross the road in my city.

句子末尾的“as”没有连接后续内容，导致句子结构不完整，应去掉“as”。

× There are lots of roads in my city and people walking across the roads, according to.

✓ There are lots of roads in my city and people walk across the roads.

“people walking”缺少谓语动词，应改为“people walk”。“according to”没有后续内容，导致句子不完整，应删除。

× In my city, road roads are not quite wild like roads in Beijing.

✓ In my city, roads are not as wild as roads in Beijing.

“road roads”重复且错误，应改为“roads”。另外，比较结构应使用“not as...as”。

× While all of them are tidy and well organized for people to.

✓ All of them are tidy and well organized for people to use.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，补充“use”使句子完整。

× Yes, it's for if more improvements can be taken, the city will be better.

✓ Yes, if more improvements can be made, the city will be better.

“it's for if”结构不正确，应改为“if”。“taken”用词不当，应改为“made”。

× For example the roads for riding or war can be wider as sometimes they are crowded at peak time.

✓ For example, the roads for riding or walking can be wider as sometimes they are crowded at peak time.

“war”应为“walking”，是拼写错误。

× For example the roads for riding or war can be wider as sometimes they are crowded at peak time.

✓ For example, the roads for riding or walking can be wider because sometimes they are crowded at peak time.

“as”用作连词时语义不清，建议用“because”表示原因。