Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문법 오류와 단어 선택에 주의하세요. 'load' 대신 'roads'를 사용하고, 'coaching'은 'causing'으로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만들기 위해 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy, especially during peak hours like mornings and evenings. This is mainly because many people commute to work or school at those times, causing heavy traffic. For example, Main Street near my house often gets congested during these periods.

提案: 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요. 'do across the road'는 'do cross the road'로 수정해야 하며, 'share work'는 문맥상 맞지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고 명확한 의미 전달을 위해 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, people frequently cross the road in the city where I live, especially in busy areas like shopping districts and near public transport stops. Many crossings are regulated by traffic lights and pedestrian signals to ensure safety. However, some people tend to jaywalk, which can be risky.

提案: 단어 선택과 문장 구조에 주의하세요. 'load'는 'roads'로, 'pestilence'는 문맥에 맞지 않으므로 'potholes'로 수정해야 합니다. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: The condition of the roads in my city is generally quite good, especially in the central area where maintenance is regular. However, in some suburban neighborhoods, the roads can be uneven and have potholes, which makes driving a bit uncomfortable despite the local government's efforts.

提案: 단어 선택과 문장 완성에 주의하세요. 'Lord'는 'roads'로, 'Itchy'는 문맥에 맞지 않습니다. 'puzzles'도 적절하지 않으니 'potholes'로 수정하세요. 문장을 완성하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I believe the roads in my city definitely need improvement. Many streets are often congested and poorly maintained. This causes frequent traffic jams and accidents. For example, potholes and unclear road markings make driving difficult and unsafe. So, upgrading the infrastructure would greatly enhance traffic flow and safety.

× Yes, the load in my area are quite busy, especially during peak hours like mornings and evenings.

✓ Yes, the roads in my area are quite busy, especially during peak hours like mornings and evenings.

The word 'load' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'roads' to match the context. Also, 'are' correctly agrees with the plural noun 'roads'.

× This is mainly because many people commute to work or school at those times, coaching heavy traffic.

✓ This is mainly because many people commute to work or school at those times, causing heavy traffic.

The verb 'coaching' is incorrect; the correct present participle form is 'causing' to indicate the result of commuting causing heavy traffic.

× For example the Main Street near my house often get congestion with the current process.

✓ For example, the Main Street near my house often gets congestion with the current process.

The subject 'Main Street' is singular, so the verb should be 'gets' (third person singular). Also, 'congestion' is uncountable and used correctly here.

× Yes, people do across the road frequently in the city where I live, especially in busy area like shopping district and near public transport stops.

✓ Yes, people do cross the road frequently in the city where I live, especially in busy areas like shopping districts and near public transport stops.

The verb 'do across' is incorrect; it should be 'do cross'. Also, 'area' and 'shopping district' should be plural to match the context.

× Many crossing are regulated by traffic light and pedestrians signal to ensure safety.

✓ Many crossings are regulated by traffic lights and pedestrian signals to ensure safety.

'Crossing' should be plural 'crossings'. 'Traffic light' and 'pedestrians signal' should be plural 'traffic lights' and 'pedestrian signals'.

× However, some people tend to share work which can be risky due to.

✓ However, some people tend to jaywalk, which can be risky.

The phrase 'share work' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'jaywalk'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× The condition of the load in my city is generally quite good, especially in the central area where maintenance is regular.

✓ The condition of the roads in my city is generally quite good, especially in the central area where maintenance is regular.

'Load' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'roads'.

× However, in some suburban neighborhoods the roads can be uneven and have a pestilence which makes driving out a little bit uncomfortable over the local government is make.

✓ However, in some suburban neighborhoods, the roads can be uneven and have potholes, which makes driving a little bit uncomfortable due to insufficient local government maintenance.

'Pestilence' is incorrect; likely intended 'potholes'. The sentence structure was unclear and needed correction for meaning and grammar.

× Yes, I believe the Lord in my city definitely need improvement.

✓ Yes, I believe the roads in my city definitely need improvement.

'Lord' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'roads'. Also, 'need' agrees with plural subject 'roads'.

× Many streets are often congested and poorly maintained. Itchy causes frequent traffic jams and accident.

✓ Many streets are often congested and poorly maintained. This causes frequent traffic jams and accidents.

'Itchy' is incorrect; should be 'This'. 'Accident' should be plural 'accidents' to match 'traffic jams'.

× For example, puzzles and unclear Rd. markings make driving difficult and unsafe.

✓ For example, potholes and unclear road markings make driving difficult and unsafe.

'Puzzles' is incorrect; likely intended 'potholes'. 'Rd.' should be written as 'road' for clarity.

× So upgrading the infrastructure would greatly enhance.

✓ So upgrading the infrastructure would greatly enhance the situation.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs an object after 'enhance' to be grammatically correct.