Road— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议避免重复并使用正确的时态和句型，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, the roads near my house are very busy because it is close to a commercial area, so traffic jams happen frequently.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，建议使用正确的介词和句子结构，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, people often cross the road near big malls or schools, and there are traffic lights to help them cross safely.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误（crabs应为cracks），且表达不够具体，建议使用准确词汇并补充具体细节。

例: I think the roads near my house are in poor condition because they have many cracks and have not been repaired for years.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误，且表达不完整，建议注意语法一致性，避免重复，并使用准确词汇。

例: Yes, the roads definitely need improvement because they have many cracks and the road markings have faded.

× So there's always some traffic jam.

✓ So there's always some traffic jams.

traffic jam 是可数名词，表示交通堵塞，复数形式应为 traffic jams。这里表示经常有多次堵车，应该用复数形式。

× There are always traffic jam happened there.

✓ There is always traffic jam happening there.

traffic jam 是单数名词，前面用 are 不正确，应使用 is。且 happened 是过去式，句子描述经常发生的情况，应使用现在分词 happening。

× there will be some traffic lights to navigate them to across the road.

✓ there will be some traffic lights to navigate them across the road.

动词 navigate 后面不需要介词 to，直接加宾语即可。to across 是错误搭配，应去掉 to。

× The roads near my house, uh, have some crabs on them and for many years nobody repaired them.

✓ The roads near my house, uh, have some cracks on them and for many years nobody repaired them.

crabs 是螃蟹，语境应为路面裂缝，正确单词是 cracks。

× because the condition of the roads are not so good.

✓ because the condition of the roads is not so good.

主语是 the condition，单数，谓语动词应使用 is 而非 are。

× There are many crabs on them and.

✓ There are many cracks on them.

同上，crabs 应为 cracks，表示裂缝。

× The colour of some rose have fade as well faded as.

✓ The colour of some roses has faded as well.

rose 应为复数 roses，主语是 the colour，单数，谓语动词应为 has faded。