Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“becauses”应为“because”，且“pleasant smile”用词不当，应为“pleasant smell”。建议注意语法和词汇的准确性，避免用词错误。

例: Yes, I really like perfume because it can lift my mood and boost my confidence. Additionally, the pleasant smell always makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和断句不完整，如“comfortable an. Relaxed”应连贯表达。建议注意句子完整性和流畅性，避免断句错误。

例: Well, sometimes I use perfume in my daily life because I think it's a great way to make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“becauses”应为“because”，“can makes”应为“can make”。建议加强语法基础，确保动词形式正确。

例: I think it's a good idea to buy perfume as a gift because many people enjoy receiving perfume as it can make them feel comfortable and relaxed.

提案: 回答断句不连贯，表达不完整，且缺乏具体细节。建议练习连贯表达，使用连接词丰富内容。

例: Well, I think the price of perfumes depends on their quality. If a perfume has high quality ingredients, its price is usually high.

× Yes, I really like perfume becauses it can lift my mood and boost my confidence.

✓ Yes, I really like perfume because it can lift my mood and boost my confidence.

单词 'becauses' 是错误的，正确的连词是 'because'，表示原因。

× Additionally, the pleasant smile always makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ Additionally, the pleasant smell always makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

这里的 'smile' 应为 'smell'，因为谈论的是香水的气味，使用错误的代词导致句意不明。

× Well, sometimes I use perfume in my daily life. I think it's a great way to make me feel comfortable an. Relaxed.

✓ Well, sometimes I use perfume in my daily life. I think it's a great way to make me feel comfortable and relaxed.

句子中 'an.' 是错误的断句，应为 'and' 连接两个形容词，保持句子完整。

× I think it's a good idea to buy perfume as a gift. Many people enjoy receiving perfume becauses it can makes them feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I think it's a good idea to buy perfume as a gift. Many people enjoy receiving perfume because it can make them feel comfortable and relaxed.

'becauses' 应为 'because'，且 'can makes' 中 'makes' 应为原形 'make'，因为情态动词后接动词原形。

× Well, I think the price of perfumes depends on the. Quality. It has high quality. Maybe the price is high.

✓ Well, I think the price of perfumes depends on the quality. If it has high quality, maybe the price is high.

句子断句错误，'the. Quality.' 应合并为 'the quality'，并且后面句子需要连接词使句意连贯。