Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“made”应为“makes”，“impressions”应为单数形式“impression”，且“clashing”用词不当，建议使用“collection”。回答应更简洁且连贯。

例: Yes, I like wearing perfume because it makes me feel more confident. It also leaves a lasting impression on people I meet. I have a collection of perfumes from various brands.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“everyday”应为“every day”，“perfect”应为“perfume”，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意语法和拼写，保持句子完整和连贯。

例: Yes, I usually wear perfume every day, especially when I go out with my friends. It makes me feel fresher and helps me leave a good impression on them.

提案: 回答中有重复提问，语法错误和表达不清晰，如“an”应为“and”，句子结构混乱。建议直接回答问题，注意语法和句子连贯性。

例: No, I usually don't buy perfume as a gift because I don't know how to choose the right one. However, my girlfriend once bought me a perfume for my birthday when I was 20, and I really liked it and used it every day.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，如“Perfil”应为“perfumes”，句子不完整且表达不自然。建议注意拼写，保持句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: It depends on the type of perfume you choose. Luxury brands can be very expensive and cost a fortune. However, there are also many affordable perfumes available in the market.

× I enjoy wearing perfume because it made me feel more confident.

✓ I enjoy wearing perfume because it makes me feel more confident.

这里时态不一致。主句用现在时（enjoy），从句应使用一般现在时（makes），表示习惯性动作。

× It can leave a lasting impressions on people I meet.

✓ It can leave a lasting impression on people I meet.

名词'impressions'应为单数'impression'，因为前面有形容词'lasting'修饰，表示单一的持续印象。

× And I have a clashing of perfumes from various brands.

✓ And I have a collection of perfumes from various brands.

'clashing'用法不当，应使用'collection'表示收藏。'clashing'是形容词或动名词，不能表示收藏。

× Yes, I usually use perfume everyday, especially when I go out with my friends.

✓ Yes, I usually use perfume every day, especially when I go out with my friends.

'everyday'是形容词，表示日常的；'every day'是副词短语，表示每天。此处应使用副词短语。

× I like wearing perfect because it made me feel fresher.

✓ I like wearing perfume because it makes me feel fresher.

单词拼写错误，'perfect'应为'perfume'。时态应保持一致，主句用一般现在时，原因状语从句也应用一般现在时。

× Ann. Live a good impression on my friends.

✓ And leave a good impression on my friends.

句子结构错误，'Ann.'应为'And'，且应为动词短语'leave a good impression'，而非单独的动词。

× Will you buy perfume as a gift? No, actually I don't know how to choose perfume.

✓ No, actually I don't know how to choose perfume.

重复了问题句，应删除多余的'Will you buy perfume as a gift?'。

× But my girlfriend, no.

✓ But my girlfriend doesn't.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，需补充动词以表达否定。

× She once bought me a perfume as a birthday gift when I was about 20 years old.

✓ She once bought me a perfume as a birthday gift when I was about 20 years old.

句子正确，无需修改。

× I really like it an I use every day.

✓ I really like it and I use it every day.

缺少连词'and'，且第二个句子缺少宾语'it'，需补充。

× It depends on the type of perfume you choose.

✓ It depends on the type of perfume you choose.

句子正确，无需修改。

× If you buy a luxury brand, it can be very expensive and cost a fortune.

✓ If you buy a luxury brand, it can be very expensive and cost a fortune.

句子正确，无需修改。

× However, there are also many affordable. Perfil available in market?

✓ However, there are also many affordable perfumes available in the market.

句子结构错误，'Perfil'拼写错误，应为'perfumes'，且句子应连贯完整。