Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构和词汇，避免拼写错误，并且使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I really like perfume because it makes me feel more comfortable. When I go out with my friends, I usually wear perfume.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰，并且避免重复和不连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I use perfume every day. I enjoy wearing it because it makes me feel more confident, especially when I go out with my friends.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子，避免断句和拼写错误，表达礼物的实用性和适用性时要具体明确。

例: Yes, I usually buy perfume as a gift for my friends because it is practical and beautiful. Perfume is suitable for many different people and can make them feel special.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点，明确说明价格因品牌和质量而异。

例: I think the price of perfumes depends on the brand and quality. Some perfumes are very expensive, but others are affordable.

× Yes, I really like perfume because it impacts me feel more comfort dental.

✓ Yes, I really like perfume because it makes me feel more comfortable.

句中使用了错误的代词和动词搭配，'impacts me feel' 应改为 'makes me feel'，'comfort dental' 应为形容词 'comfortable'。建议学习动词搭配和形容词用法。

× What I've got out with my friends, I usually wear perfume.

✓ When I go out with my friends, I usually wear perfume.

句中 'What I've got out' 用法错误，应使用时间状语从句 'When I go out'。建议加强介词和时间状语从句的学习。

× Yes Sir, I used packing every day.

✓ Yes Sir, I use perfume every day.

'used packing' 语法错误，应该是现在时 'use perfume'。'packing' 不是此处正确词汇。建议注意动词时态和词汇选择。

× I enjoy wearing perfume because the image me feel more competent.

✓ I enjoy wearing perfume because it makes me feel more confident.

'the image me feel' 结构错误，应为 'it makes me feel'，'competent' 语义不合，改为 'confident' 更合适。建议学习正确的句子结构和词汇搭配。

× Especially when I go out with my friends.

✓ Especially when I go out with my friends, I wear perfume.

该句为不完整句，应补充主句使其完整。建议注意句子完整性。

× Yes Sir, I usually buy perfume as a gift for my friends.

✓ Yes Sir, I usually buy perfume as a gift for my friends.

该句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Because I think that is practical and the beautiful.

✓ Because I think it is practical and beautiful.

'the beautiful' 使用错误，形容词前不加定冠词，且应使用 'it' 指代前文。建议注意冠词和代词用法。

× Hatfield is suitable for many different people.

✓ Perfume is suitable for many different people.

'Hatfield' 可能为误写，应为 'Perfume'，句子结构正确。建议注意词汇拼写。

× And that it can make an M feel special.

✓ And it can make me feel special.

'an M' 应为 'me'，句子结构错误。建议注意代词拼写和句子完整性。

× I think is depends on friends and the quality.

✓ I think it depends on the brand and the quality.

缺少主语 'it'，'friends' 应为 'brand' 更符合语境。建议注意主语完整和词汇选择。

× Some help in the plans that is very costly.

✓ Some perfumes are very costly.

句子结构混乱，应简化为 'Some perfumes are very costly.'。建议学习简单句结构。

× Bus Alacer. Ah. Affordable.

✓ But others are affordable.

拼写错误，且句子不完整，应为 'But others are affordable.'。建议注意拼写和句子完整性。