Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，表达不完整且有语法错误。建议用更完整的句子表达喜欢香水的原因，并避免口语缩写。

例: Yes, I really like perfume because it makes me feel refreshed and confident.

提案: 回答内容混乱且难以理解，缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议简洁明了地说明是否日常使用香水，并给出具体原因。

例: I don't usually use perfume daily because I often do sports and sweat a lot, so I feel it's unnecessary.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议直接回答是否会买香水作为礼物，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because it is a thoughtful present that can express emotions.

提案: 回答内容混乱且语法错误多，难以理解。建议简洁表达对香水价格的看法，并给出理由。

例: Yes, I think perfumes are expensive because they have unique scents and high-quality ingredients.

× I'm not your only use perfume in my daily life because I opened with sports like school says activate a lot I feel is warning room. It's not necessary for me.

✓ I don't usually use perfume in my daily life because I often do sports at school and sweat a lot. I feel it's not necessary for me.

原句中“I'm not your only use perfume”结构错误，应该用一般现在时的否定形式“I don't usually use perfume”。此外，句子中表达不清，需调整为更自然的表达。建议使用简单句表达习惯和原因。

× Yes, I absolutely. About perfume killed my father advocates as a father gift to really like it I think Prof you how can express my. Emotional.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I bought perfume for my father as a gift because he really likes it. I think perfume can express my emotions.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾，且词语使用错误。需要拆分成多个句子，明确表达买香水作为礼物的原因和香水的意义。

× I think perfume is raining sponsee is lectures becauses perfume special smell.

✓ I think perfume is quite expensive because perfume has a special smell.

原句中“raining sponsee is lectures”是拼写错误，应为“quite expensive”。此外，“perfume special smell”缺少动词，应改为“perfume has a special smell”。

× I was special flavors and maybe its can. Can be better? Can we make more different with the others?

✓ It has special flavors and maybe it can be better. Can we make it more different from others?

原句中“its can”错误使用了物主代词，应使用主格代词“it”。“make more different with the others”搭配错误，应为“make it more different from others”。