Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“helped”应为“helps”，“a light floral thing”表达不准确，且“there a present impression”语句不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达。

例: Yes, I like perfume because it helps me feel more confident and refreshed throughout the day. For example, I often wear a light floral scent that is subtle but leaves a pleasant impression.

提案: 回答较为完整，但“light floral scent that are”中“scent”应为单数，且可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。建议注意主谓一致，并适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, I use perfume every day because it helps me feel more confident and fresh. For example, I usually choose a light floral scent that is not too overpowering but still leaves a pleasant impression.

提案: 回答结构清晰，表达自然。可以通过增加连接词使句子更流畅，例如使用“because”连接原因。

例: Yes, I would definitely consider buying perfume as a gift because it is a personal and thoughtful present that many people appreciate as it reflects their taste and personality.

提案: 回答内容具体，但“quality of ingredient”应为“quality of ingredients”，且可以使用连接词使句子更连贯。建议注意复数形式和句子连接。

例: Yes, I think perfumes can be quite expensive, especially those from well-known luxury brands, because the high cost is often due to the quality of ingredients and the brand's reputation.

× I often wear a light floral thing that is not too overpowering, but there a present impression.

✓ I often wear a light floral scent that is not too overpowering, but there is a pleasant impression.

原句中使用了"thing"，不符合语境，应使用"scent"表示香味；此外，缺少动词"is"，导致句子结构不完整。应补充"there is"来表达存在某种印象。

× I usually choose light floral scent that are not too overpowering, but still leave a pleasant impression.

✓ I usually choose light floral scents that are not too overpowering, but still leave a pleasant impression.

"scent"应使用复数形式"scents"，因为后文谓语动词用的是复数"are"，主谓一致需要保持一致。

× The high cost is often due to the quality of ingredient and brand reputation.

✓ The high cost is often due to the quality of ingredients and brand reputation.

"ingredient"应使用复数形式"ingredients"，因为通常指多种成分，保持与前文"quality"搭配的逻辑一致。