Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免使用不恰当的词汇，如'reverse'。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述气味和价格。

例: No, I don't like perfume because I think it smells too strong and it is quite expensive for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，'in my designs'和'so I while wearing perfume'不合适。建议简洁明了地表达不使用香水的原因，并使用正确的句子结构。

例: No, I never use perfume in my daily life because I don't like its smell; I prefer natural scents.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如'families'应为'family members'，'don't like use perfume'应为'don't like to use perfume'，'instead of perfect'应为'instead of perfume'。建议注意词汇的准确使用和句子结构的完整。

例: No, none of my family members or close friends like to use perfume, so I prefer to choose their favorite things as gifts instead of perfume.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但用词不准确，如'a small button'应为'a small bottle'，'not enough for use one year'表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。

例: Yes, I think perfumes are expensive because a small bottle can cost more than CN¥300, and it may not last for a whole year.

× No, I don't like perfume because I think it smell too reverse and it's very expensive for me.

✓ No, I don't like perfume because I think it smells too strong and it's very expensive for me.

这里的主语是单数的 perfume，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式 "smells"，而不是 "smell"。另外，"reverse" 可能是拼写错误，应为 "strong"（浓烈的）。

× No, I never use perfume in my designs because I don't like its smell and I like natural smell so I while wearing perfume.

✓ No, I never use perfume in my designs because I don't like its smell and I like natural smell, so I avoid wearing perfume.

句中 "so I while wearing perfume" 结构不正确，应该用动词短语表达避免做某事，改为 "so I avoid wearing perfume"。这里 "wearing" 是动名词形式，正确使用。

× No, all of my families and close friends don't like use perfume and I will choose their favorite things as a gift instead of perfect.

✓ No, all of my family members and close friends don't like to use perfume and I will choose their favorite things as a gift instead of perfume.

"families" 应为 "family members" 或 "family"，因为 "family" 是不可数名词或集合名词，表示家庭成员。"like use" 应为 "like to use"，动词不定式形式。"instead of perfect" 应为 "instead of perfume"，可能是拼写错误。

× Yes, I think perfumes are expensive because a small button of that must be more than CN¥300 and it's not enough for use one year.

✓ Yes, I think perfumes are expensive because a small bottle of that must cost more than CN¥300 and it's not enough for use for one year.

"button" 应为 "bottle"，表示瓶子。"must be more than" 应改为 "must cost more than"，更符合表达价格的习惯。"not enough for use one year" 应为 "not enough for use for one year"，需要加介词 "for"。