Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and slightly repetitive. Try to form a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct grammar and more natural phrasing.

例: Yes, I really like perfumes, especially those with sweet and woody scents because they feel warm and comforting.

提案: Your answer is too short and contains a vocabulary mistake ('cents' instead of 'scents' or 'perfume'). Try to give a complete sentence with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

例: Yes, I usually wear perfume every day to feel fresh and confident.

提案: Your answer is very brief and lacks supporting details. Try to expand your answer with reasons or examples to make it more natural and effective.

例: Yes, definitely. Perfume makes a thoughtful gift because it is personal and shows you care about the person's taste.

提案: Your answer has a grammar mistake and is a bit vague. Try to use correct grammar and provide more specific details or reasons.

例: Yes, perfumes have become more expensive in my country recently, probably due to higher import taxes and production costs.

× I love perfumes with the sweeter and woody fragrance I like the most.

✓ I love perfumes with the sweet and woody fragrance I like the most.

The adjective 'sweeter' is a comparative form and is incorrectly used here to describe a general quality. The correct form is the positive adjective 'sweet' to describe the fragrance. Using 'sweet' properly modifies 'fragrance' without implying comparison.

× Yes, I usually put on cents.

✓ Yes, I usually put on scents.

The word 'cents' is a homophone error; the correct word is 'scents' which refers to smells or fragrances. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects the meaning of the sentence.

× Yes, in my country nowadays perfumes is more expensive.

✓ Yes, in my country nowadays perfumes are more expensive.

The subject 'perfumes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.