Perfume— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简短且重复，建议增加具体细节，避免简单重复表达。可以描述喜欢香水的原因或喜欢的香型。

例: Yes, I love perfume because it makes me feel confident. I usually choose floral scents before going to school.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I usually wear perfume when I go out with my friends or attend classes at school.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，形容词使用不当，建议使用正确的形容词形式并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I bought a perfume for my friend last weekend as a gift, and she was really happy and excited.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，建议增加具体原因和细节，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: Yes, perfumes are often expensive because they require skilled craftsmanship and high-quality ingredients.

× I often use perfume before I go out to hang out with my friend and I also use it in the school.

✓ I often use perfume before I go out to hang out with my friends and I also use it in school.

这里的friend应该用复数形式friends，因为通常和朋友们一起出去。并且在表达“在学校”时，不需要加定冠词the，直接用in school即可。

× my friend was really happy and exciting.

✓ my friend was really happy and excited.

exciting是形容事物令人兴奋的，excited是形容人的情绪状态。这里描述朋友的感受，应该用excited。

× because I think perfume requires a lot of labour and also the exquisite techniques.

✓ because I think perfume requires a lot of labour and also exquisite techniques.

这里的exquisite techniques前不需要加定冠词the，因为是泛指精湛的技术。