Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“encouraged and motivated me”应为“encouraged and motivated me”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my English teacher. She always encouraged and motivated me when I felt upset, which made me feel very warm and supported.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但“which make our conversations more meaningful”中的“make”应为“makes”，注意主谓一致。建议注意语法细节，使用更多连接词提升连贯性。

例: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teacher, although not very often because we are both busy. However, we usually catch up during holidays or special occasions, which makes our conversations more meaningful.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和句子未完成，影响表达效果。建议注意时态一致，避免重复词汇，并完整表达思想，使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: My favourite teacher helped me a lot in my studies. For example, she patiently taught me how to solve specific problems in daily life, and she motivated and inspired me when I faced difficulties.

提案: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，使用了原因说明，结构合理。建议可以适当使用更多连接词如“therefore”来增强逻辑性。

例: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future. Although I admired my high school teachers because they were very inspiring, I lack the patience required to teach effectively and the skills to manage a class well. Therefore, I don't think teaching is the right career for me.

× She really helps helped me a lot in my study.

✓ She really helped me a lot in my study.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用过去时态。'helps'是现在时，需改为过去时'helped'。

× She motivated me and inspired me when I.

✓ She motivated me and inspired me when I needed it.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致句子结构错误。需要补充完整的谓语部分使句子完整。

× which make our conversations more meaningful.

✓ which makes our conversations more meaningful.

关系代词'which'指代单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'，而不是'make'。