Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且信息重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并清晰表达喜欢老师的原因。

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is called Teacher Tree, which is interesting because my own name means 'tree'. She is very famous for teaching Chinese dancing, and I really admire her.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子解释原因。

例: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teacher because it has been a long time, and I was not a very good student back then.

提案: 回答缺乏具体细节，表达不流畅。建议具体说明老师如何帮助自己，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: My favourite teacher helped me improve my learning skills and dancing techniques. For example, she gave me extra practice sessions, which really boosted my confidence.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用简单明了的句子表达未来职业规划，并说明原因。

例: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I love dancing. I plan to study education so that I can teach dance to others.

× I very like my teacher name is the tree teacher because my own name is a tree.

✓ I really like my teacher. Her name is the Tree Teacher because my own name is Tree.

这里 'very like' 是错误的用法，应该用副词 'really' 来修饰动词 'like'。此外，句子结构混乱，需拆分成两个句子以表达清楚。建议使用 'really like' 来表达强烈喜欢的意思。

× Also my teacher name is a tree who is a very famous teacher in Chinese dancing.

✓ Also, my teacher named Tree is a very famous teacher in Chinese dancing.

句子中 'my teacher name is a tree' 结构不正确，应该用 'my teacher named Tree' 来表达老师的名字。

× No, because it has a long time and also I don't a good student in a primary school.

✓ No, because it has been a long time and also I wasn't a good student in primary school.

'it has a long time' 应该用完成时态 'it has been a long time' 来表达时间的持续。'I don't a good student' 缺少动词，正确表达是 'I wasn't a good student'。

× She can help a lot of things.

✓ She can help with a lot of things.

动词 'help' 后面需要加介词 'with' 来引出帮助的内容。

× For example, she can help my learn ability and dancing.

✓ For example, she can help my learning ability and dancing.

'my learn ability' 中 'learn' 应该用名词形式 'learning' 来修饰 'ability'。

× I think she can help me a lot.

✓ I think she can help me a lot.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Of course, I want to be a teacher in the future because I am dancing performance.

✓ Of course, I want to be a teacher in the future because I am a dance performer.

'dancing performance' 用法错误，应该用名词短语 'dance performer' 来表示职业。

× I for example, I want to study of study education, so I want to be.

✓ For example, I want to study education, so I want to be a teacher.

'study of study education' 结构错误，正确表达是 'study education'。句子末尾缺少宾语，需补充 'a teacher'。