Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you have a favourite teacher?
受験者
Yes I do. She is my math teacher in my primary school and she is a beautiful woman and is always willing to help me when I meet some trouble.
試験官
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
受験者
Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still play a crucial role in my learning. I often telephone them on traditional festivals and.
試験官
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
受験者
In my learning skills and how to be a better person. For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be a more patient and friendly.
試験官
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
受験者
Of course I do, my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with child and enjoyed sharing knowledge with the next generation.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you have a favourite teacher?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时应避免使用与问题无关的描述（如“beautiful woman”），并且注意语法错误，如“when I meet some trouble”应为“when I have some trouble”。建议回答更自然且简洁，突出老师的特点和帮助。
例: Yes, my favourite teacher was my primary school math teacher. She was very patient and always ready to help me whenever I had difficulties with my studies.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teacher?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“play”应为“plays”，且句子不完整。建议回答时注意语法正确，句子完整，并具体说明联系的方式和原因。
例: Yes, I am still in touch with her because she continues to influence my learning. I often call her during traditional festivals to catch up and seek advice.
In what way did your favourite teacher help you?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答缺少主题句，且表达不完整。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，注意形容词的正确形式，如“more patient and friendly”应为“more patient and friendly”。
例: My favourite teacher helped me improve my learning skills and personal qualities. For example, she taught me to be more patient and friendly towards others.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“trans language teacher”不明确，应为“translator or language teacher”，且“child”应为“children”，时态不一致。建议回答时用正确的词汇和语法，表达清晰。
例: Yes, I want to be a language teacher in the future because I enjoy working with children and sharing knowledge with the next generation.
文法
× Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still play a crucial role in my learning.
✓ Yes, I am, because this teacher in my primary school still plays a crucial role in my learning.
主语是单数的'teacher'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'plays'，而不是'play'。主谓一致错误需要注意动词形式的变化。
× I often telephone them on traditional festivals and.
✓ I often telephone her on traditional festivals.
前文提到的是单数的'teacher'，所以代词应为单数'hers'，而不是复数'them'。此外，句子末尾的'and'不完整，应去掉。
× For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be a more patient and friendly.
✓ For example, the teacher in my primary school taught me how to be more patient and friendly.
'patient'和'friendly'是形容词，前面不需要加冠词'a'，因为这里是形容词用作表语，表示状态。
× my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with child and enjoyed sharing knowledge with the next generation.
✓ my dream is to be a trans language teacher in the future because I like to get along with children and enjoy sharing knowledge with the next generation.
'child'应使用复数形式'children'，表示泛指孩子们；'enjoyed'时态错误，应与前文保持一致用现在时'enjoy'。
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