Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“he is teach music”应为“he teaches music”，且“they taught me along”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和单数复数形式，避免模糊表达。

例: Yes, I definitely have a favourite teacher. He teaches music at my secondary school, and I really like him because he has always supported me in learning.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I've lose contact”应为“I've lost contact”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I'm not really in touch with my primary school teachers because most of them have probably retired. However, I plan to contact them someday to express my gratitude.

提案: 回答中时态和主谓一致有误，如“provide”应为“provides”，“they”指代不明。建议保持时态一致，使用明确的代词，并丰富细节。

例: My favourite teacher not only taught me academic subjects but also provided emotional support. For example, he cared about my well-being and often asked about my daily life.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“to educational industry”应为“to the educational industry”，“teach student”应为“teach students”。句子结尾不完整。建议注意冠词使用，复数形式及句子完整性。

例: Yes, definitely. I want to contribute to the educational industry because I have learned a lot from my teachers. I hope to teach students and support them to feel more comfortable in learning.

× I have a favorite teacher and he is teach music in my secondary school, so I really like him 'cause they taught me along.

✓ I have a favorite teacher and he teaches music in my secondary school, so I really like him 'cause he taught me a lot.

这里动词用法错误，'he is teach' 应改为第三人称单数形式 'he teaches'，因为主语是单数第三人称。'they taught me along' 中 'they' 指代不明且与前文不符，应改为 'he'，'along' 用词错误，应为 'a lot' 表示很多。

× I'm not really in touch with my primary teachers because most of them have probably retired. Also, I've lose contact over the years since we don't have many opportunities to communicate so but I will try to communicate them to express my gratitude.

✓ I'm not really in touch with my primary teachers because most of them have probably retired. Also, I've lost contact over the years since we don't have many opportunities to communicate, but I will try to contact them to express my gratitude.

'I've lose' 应为现在完成时，动词应为过去分词形式 'lost'。'communicate them' 用法错误，动词 communicate 通常不直接跟人，应改为 'contact them'。句中 'so but' 连接词重复，应去掉 'so'。

× So my favorite teacher, he doesn't just teach me something academic but also provide a lot of emotional support to me. For example, they will care about me and ask me some questions about my daily life.

✓ So my favorite teacher, he doesn't just teach me something academic but also provides a lot of emotional support to me. For example, he cares about me and asks me some questions about my daily life.

主语是单数第三人称 'he'，动词应加 -s 变为 'provides'。'they' 指代错误，应改为 'he'。动词 'care' 和 'ask' 也应改为第三人称单数形式 'cares' 和 'asks'。

× Yeah, definitely. I really want to contribute and to educational industry cause yes I have learned a lot of things from a teacher. So I want to be a teacher to teach student and to give support to student and make them be more comfortable or.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I really want to contribute to the educational industry because I have learned a lot of things from a teacher. So I want to be a teacher to teach students and to give support to students and make them more comfortable.

'contribute and to educational industry' 中 'contribute' 后应接介词 'to'，且 'educational industry' 前应加定冠词 'the'。'teach student' 和 'support to student' 中 'student' 应为复数 'students'。句尾 'make them be more comfortable or' 结构不完整，应去掉 'be' 和 'or'。