Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về giáo viên yêu thích. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như số nhiều/số ít và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I do. My favourite teacher is my technical teacher, Ms. Thor. She is very friendly and kind, which makes learning enjoyable.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lỗi sai như 'are haven't'. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: No, I haven't been in touch with my primary school teacher for five years because we haven't met since then.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'after met her' nên là 'after I met her'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

例: I used to dislike chemistry, but after I met her, I became more interested in the subject. She encouraged me by saying, 'You can do it and achieve the best score.' This motivation really helped me improve.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'after mature' nên là 'after I matured'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

例: Honestly, I used to want to be a teacher, but after I matured, I realized I don't have the ability for it. So, I would prefer to become an engineer instead.

× My favorite teacher is the technical ones.

✓ My favorite teacher is the technical one.

The subject 'My favorite teacher' is singular, so the complement should also be singular. 'Ones' is plural, which causes a singular and plural mismatch. Use 'one' to agree with the singular subject.

× Honestly, I haven't been connected with my primary school teacher for five years because we are haven't met together again.

✓ Honestly, I haven't been in touch with my primary school teacher for five years because we haven't met again.

The phrase 'haven't been connected' is awkward; 'haven't been in touch' is more natural. Also, 'we are haven't met' is incorrect; the correct form is 'we haven't met'. The present perfect tense is used to indicate an action that has not happened up to now.

× I used to hate learning chemical but after met her I feel that I have more interaction with this subject and she also encouraged me a lot.

✓ I used to hate learning chemistry but after meeting her I felt that I had more interaction with this subject and she also encouraged me a lot.

'Chemical' should be 'chemistry' as the subject. 'After met her' is incorrect; it should be 'after meeting her' (gerund form). The tense should be consistent: past tense 'felt' and 'had' to match 'used to hate' and 'encouraged'.

× She said you can do it, you can do your best and you and she said that I have the ability to get the best score.

✓ She said, 'You can do it, you can do your best,' and she said that I have the ability to get the best score.

The sentence is confusing due to repeated 'you and she said'. It should be split properly with quotation marks and correct pronoun usage to clarify direct speech and reported speech.

× Honestly in the past I used to want to become a teacher but after mature I felt that I'm not have the ability to become teacher so I would like to become an engineer.

✓ Honestly, in the past I used to want to become a teacher but after maturing I felt that I don't have the ability to become a teacher so I would like to become an engineer.

'After mature' is incorrect; it should be 'after maturing' (gerund form). 'I'm not have' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't have'. Also, 'become teacher' needs an article: 'become a teacher'.