Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness. For example, 'encourage' should be 'encourages' to agree with 'She'. Also, try to add a linking phrase to make your answer more natural and fluent.

例: Yes, my favourite teacher is my Senior High School teacher because she always encourages me to do my best and trusts in my potential, which really motivates me to improve.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, 'that makes me harder' should be 'which makes it harder for me'. Also, 'elementary educator' is a bit formal; 'primary school teacher' is better. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: No, I'm not. Primary school was a long time ago, and since then I've had many teachers. Moreover, I seldom use social media, which makes it harder for me to keep in touch with my primary school teacher.

提案: Your answer repeats ideas from the first question and has grammatical errors. 'Their' and 'They' are plural pronouns but refer to a single teacher. Use singular pronouns consistently. Also, try to provide more specific examples or details about how the teacher helped you, and use linking words to connect your points.

例: My favourite teacher helped me by encouraging me and understanding my difficulties, which made me feel valued and respected. For instance, she always motivated me to do my best and trusted in my potential, which boosted my confidence.

提案: The word 'deserve' is not appropriate here; 'hope' or 'would like' is better. Also, 'English educator' is a bit formal; 'English teacher' is more natural. Try to expand your answer with reasons or feelings and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I would like to be an English teacher in the future because I have always admired my teachers and want to follow in their footsteps by helping others learn.

× She always encourage me to do my best and trust in my potential.

✓ She always encourages me to do my best and trust in my potential.

The subject 'She' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'encourages' to agree in number and person. The original sentence uses 'encourage' which is incorrect for third person singular subjects.

× Moreover, I seldom use social media that makes me harder to communicate with elementary educator.

✓ Moreover, I seldom use social media, which makes it harder for me to communicate with my elementary educator.

The phrase 'makes me harder to communicate' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'makes it harder for me to communicate'. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'which' to introduce a non-restrictive clause, and 'elementary educator' should be preceded by 'my' to specify the teacher.

× Their encouragement and understanding made me feel valued and respected.

✓ Her encouragement and understanding made me feel valued and respected.

The pronoun 'Their' is plural, but the context refers to a single favourite teacher, so 'Her' is appropriate to match the singular subject.

× They always encourage me to do my best and trust in my potential.

✓ She always encourages me to do my best and trust in my potential.

The pronoun 'They' is plural, but the context refers to a single favourite teacher, so 'She' is appropriate. Also, the verb should be 'encourages' to agree with the third person singular subject.

× Yes, in the future, I deserve to be an English educator.

✓ Yes, in the future, I want to be an English educator.

The modal verb 'deserve' is incorrectly used here to express future intention. 'Want to be' is the correct expression to indicate a desire or intention for the future.