Teacher— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 整体回答自然且有具体例子，但有语法错误和表达不够简练。注意动词时态与搭配（如 expect → explain/teach），把句子长度控制在五句内，使用连接词使逻辑更顺畅。可把第一句改成直接回应，然后用两句补充细节并给出例子。

例: Yes, I do. My favourite teacher was my high school English teacher because she was very patient and explained difficult concepts clearly. She used role-plays and small group discussions to help us practice speaking, which greatly improved my confidence.

提案: 回答直接且有细节，表达礼貌。但有时态与语法小问题（e.g. 'when I struggle' 应为过去式），句子可更简洁且加入连接词提高连贯性。尝试一句话表明现状，一两句说明具体原因或影响。

例: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teacher anymore because it's been many years since I left. However, I still appreciate her patience and encouragement when I was learning to read, which really helped build my confidence.

提案: 回答结构良好、逻辑清晰且有过程描述。可用更多具体细节或例子（比如具体课堂活动）来丰富内容，同时注意避免过多重复。若再用连词如 'as a result' 可以更好地展示因果关系。

例: She mainly improved my confidence in speaking English by encouraging me to speak despite mistakes. For example, she organised weekly speaking sessions where we practised in pairs, and as a result I gradually became more confident and fluent.

提案: 回答清晰表达了职业倾向，但最后一句不完整（'and applied' 不清楚意思）。建议明确举例并用连词连接职业理由与经历，且保持句子简洁。可以补充具体成就或用途来证明兴趣。

例: No, I don't plan to be a teacher, though I respect them a lot. I prefer a career in computer science because I enjoy programming and solving complex problems; for example, I built a small web app at university that helped students organise study notes.

× My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher because she was very patient and always expects difficult concepts in a clear, simple way.

✓ My favorite teacher was my high school English teacher because she was very patient and always explained difficult concepts in a clear, simple way.

错误类型：动词+ -ing 或动词形式使用不当。原句中上下文时态为过去（was），而谓语“expects”是一般现在时，且搭配语义不合，应使用过去时的动词“explained”。建议：保持时态一致，过去描述用过去式动词。

× However, I still appreciate what she taught me, especially her patience and encouragement when I struggle with reading, which really helped build my confidence.

✓ However, I still appreciate what she taught me, especially her patience and encouragement when I struggled with reading, which really helped build my confidence.

错误类型：现在时/过去时使用不当。整句话在叙述过去发生的事情（taught, helped），但从句中用的是现在时“struggle”，应与主句时态一致改为过去式“struggled”。建议：描述过去经历时，尽量将相关动词统一用过去时。

× For example, I built a small web app at university and applied.

✓ For example, I built a small web app at university and deployed it / and applied what I learned.

错误类型：过去分词/动词形式使用不当或句子不完整。原句中“and applied”缺少宾语，造成句意不完整或误用动词。可改为“deployed it”（部署了它）或补充宾语如“applied what I learned”（应用了我所学）。建议：确保并列动词有相同的结构并且必要时补足宾语。