Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror every morning when I wash my face because I want to see if there are any changes in my appearance, like becoming more mature.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议回答时完整表达意思，使用连贯的句子，并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I buy mirrors once or twice a year because I often need them for activities like applying makeup or checking my appearance.

提案: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和句型，表达清楚携带镜子的原因。

例: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror in my bag so I can check my appearance whenever I need to, especially before meeting important people.

提案: 句子断裂，表达不连贯。建议合并句子，使用连贯的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I have a big mirror in my bedroom because it is very useful in my daily life and also serves as a nice decoration for the room.

× To my face, such as whether I become matured or not.

✓ To my face, such as whether I have matured or not.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语动词。应使用完成时态表达变化的状态，'have matured'表示已经成熟。

× Find nearest. Airy.

✓ I find the nearest one. Airy.

原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× Such as? Making up or just a daily chapter myself?

✓ Such as making up or just a daily check of myself.

原句中'chapter'用词错误，应为'check'，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整短语。

× Yes, are usually take a mirror with me.

✓ Yes, I usually take a mirror with me.

主语和谓语不一致，缺少主语'I'，且动词形式错误，应为一般现在时单数形式。

× Are usually put it in my back so I can chat line appearance whenever I needed also.

✓ I usually put it in my bag so I can check my appearance whenever I need to.

代词使用错误，'are'应为'I'，'back'应为'bag'，'chat line appearance'应为'check my appearance'，且时态需统一。

× When I need to meet someone who is important, I need to check out my face.

✓ When I need to meet someone important, I need to check my face.

'check out'在此处用法不当，改为'check'更合适；'who is important'可简化为'adjective + noun'结构。

× Of course, apparently there is a big mirror in my bedroom and I think this mirror.

✓ Of course, there is a big mirror in my bedroom, and I think this mirror

句子中'apparently'使用不当，且句子未完成，应去掉'apparently'并补充完整句子。

× Is very necessary in my daily life.

✓ is very necessary in my daily life.

句子缺少主语，应与前句合并或补充主语。

× And it can also be a great decoration in my room.

✓ It can also be a great decoration in my room.

句子开头不宜用'And'，应直接开始句子。