Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语句不够连贯，有断句错误，影响表达的自然流畅。建议练习连贯表达，避免断句错误，并适当使用连接词使句子更完整。

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror every morning because it helps me check my appearance before leaving the house. Also, I often sing while doing this, which boosts my confidence.

提案: 语法错误较多，如时态和单复数使用不当，句子结构不完整。建议加强语法基础，使用正确时态和完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I have bought some mirrors for my bedroom. I usually check my appearance every morning before leaving the house. They are very useful and help me feel confident.

提案: 表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，句子不完整。建议练习清晰表达，注意动词形式和词汇搭配，避免断句。

例: No, I don't usually take a mirror with me. If I want to check my appearance outside, I prefer to use my phone's front camera because it is more convenient.

提案: 句子断裂严重，表达不连贯，且有拼写错误。建议练习完整句子表达，使用连接词使内容连贯，并注意词汇拼写。

例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because they tend to reflect too much light, which can make the room too bright and uncomfortable. Instead, I prefer to use paintings.

× It helps me to track my appearance and make sure I look. Good before leaving your house.

✓ It helps me to track my appearance and make sure I look good before leaving my house.

句子中“look.”和“Good”之间不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将其合并为一句完整的句子。

× I sing. It is a. Habit that helps. To boost my confidence.

✓ I sing. It is a habit that helps to boost my confidence.

句子中多处不必要的句号打断了句子结构，应去除多余的句号，使句子连贯完整。

× Yes, I had bought some mirror for my bedroom.

✓ Yes, I bought some mirrors for my bedroom.

此处描述过去的动作，使用一般过去时即可，不需要过去完成时“had bought”。另外，“mirror”应为复数“mirrors”，因为买了多个。

× Yes, I had bought some mirror for my bedroom.

✓ Yes, I bought some mirrors for my bedroom.

“mirror”应使用复数形式“mirrors”，因为“some”表示多个。

× I usually track my appearance everyday morning before I leave my house.

✓ I usually check my appearance every morning before I leave my house.

“everyday morning”用法不当，应为“every morning”。另外，“track my appearance”表达不自然，改为“check my appearance”更合适。

× I think they were so useful. And helps me. Feel confident.

✓ I think they are very useful and help me feel confident.

句子断裂且时态不一致，应合并为一句完整句子，且保持时态一致。

× No, I don't usually take a mirror with me if I want to. Chuck my appearance outside.

✓ No, I don't usually take a mirror with me if I want to check my appearance outside.

“Chuck”应为“check”，且句子中断，应合并为完整句子。

× I prefer used my phones in front camera, it is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to use my phone's front camera; it is more convenient.

“used”应为“to use”，且“phones”应为单数“phone”，并且“front camera”应加所有格“phone's front camera”。

× No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because they tempted to reflect too much light.

✓ No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because they tend to reflect too much light.

“tempted”用错，应为“tend”，表示“倾向于”。

× Which can make my room. Too bright and uncomfortable.

✓ This can make my room too bright and uncomfortable.

句子开头用“Which”不完整，应改为“This”并合并为完整句子。

× Instead, I prefer to use paintings. Ghost Trio.

✓ Instead, I prefer to use paintings, like Ghost Trio.

“Ghost Trio”单独成句不完整，应与前句合并，表示举例说明。