Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: I don't often look at myself in the mirror because I don't pay much attention to my appearance. However, sometimes I check my outfit before going out to make sure I look presentable.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，说明买镜子的原因和用途。

例: Yes, I have bought a small mirror before. It is very convenient to carry around and helps me to check my appearance anytime.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但时态使用不当，表达略显生硬。建议使用更自然的时态和连接词，丰富细节。

例: Yes, I usually carry a mirror with me because it helps me to fix my makeup and tidy my hair when needed.

提案: 表达不够准确，语法和用词有误。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当的词汇和句型。

例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room because I think they are more suitable for bathrooms where people usually check their appearance.

× When I was a student, I didn't I doesn't I didn't look at mirrors some often because I don't so much care about I didn't care so much care about my outfits or outlook. I think I'm.

✓ When I was a student, I didn't look at mirrors very often because I didn't care much about my outfits or appearance.

原句结构混乱，存在多次否定和时态混用，导致句子难以理解。应简化句子结构，统一时态，去除多余词汇，使句子通顺。

× Of course I bought a little mirror. That was a very convenient to carry with to for for me to organize myself.

✓ Of course, I bought a small mirror. It was very convenient for me to carry and use to organize myself.

原句中介词使用混乱，'to for for'重复且错误。应使用正确的介词短语'convenient for me to carry'，使表达清晰。

× Yes, recently I would take a mirror with me every day because I thought it can help me to organize myself and to make up sometimes.

✓ Yes, recently I have been taking a mirror with me every day because I think it can help me organize myself and put on makeup sometimes.

原句中'modal verb'使用不当，'would'不适合表示最近的习惯动作，应使用现在完成进行时表达最近的持续行为。

× No, I don't think mirrors can decorate my room. I don't like to have a mirror in my bedroom or living room. I think it is only fit in the washroom and can help people to fit their self.

✓ No, I don't think mirrors can decorate my room. I don't like to have a mirror in my bedroom or living room. I think they only fit in the washroom and can help people to fix themselves.

原句中代词使用错误，'it'指代复数'mirrors'应使用'they'，'fit their self'应为'fix themselves'，代词反身形式错误。