Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时表达不够自然，句子结构重复且有语法错误，建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I do like looking at myself in the mirror, but only occasionally. I think mirrors help me notice small changes in my appearance without spending too much time.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议先明确回答，再用完整句子说明原因，避免断句和语法错误。

例: Yes, I bought a big mirror when I went to university because it helped me check if my clothes fit me properly.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法和用词有误。建议使用更自然的表达，注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: No, I usually don't carry a mirror with me because I can easily find a public restroom to check my hair and face, which is more convenient.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构简单，连接词使用不足。建议丰富细节并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: No, I don't use mirrors as decoration in my room. However, I have a large mirror in my bathroom with bright lighting to help me see clearly.

× I like looking at myself in the mirror, but I don't waste too much time looking at myself because I think the mirror is a good way to show you the changes at the recent time, but it's not a good way to waste too much time.

✓ I like looking at myself in the mirror, but I don't waste too much time looking at myself because I think the mirror is a good way to show you the recent changes, but it's not a good way to waste too much time.

“at the recent time”表达不自然，应改为“the recent changes”表示最近的变化，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, I have bought a big mirror when I go to when I went to university because without mirror we can't. Few if our clothes is. Proper for our body.

✓ Yes, I bought a big mirror when I went to university because without a mirror we can't tell if our clothes are proper for our body.

“have bought”与具体过去时间点“when I went to university”不搭配，应使用一般过去时“bought”。“go to when I went”语序错误，应删除“go to”。“without mirror”缺少冠词，应为“without a mirror”。“Few if our clothes is”语法错误，应改为“if our clothes are”。

× No, I never take a mirror with me because it's convenient for me to find a popular public toilet to check my hair and my face.

✓ No, I never take a mirror with me because it's convenient for me to find a public toilet to check my hair and my face.

“popular public toilet”用词不当，公共厕所一般不使用“popular”形容，去掉“popular”更合适。

× I think take a mirror is inconvenient.

✓ I think taking a mirror is inconvenient.

动词“think”后接动名词作主语时，应使用动名词形式“taking”，而不是不定式或原形动词。

× No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room. I just put a big mirror in my toilet and put on a big light to make it more clear.

✓ No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room. I just put a big mirror in my bathroom and put on a big light to make it clearer.

“toilet”通常指厕所，日常生活中放镜子和灯光的地方应为“bathroom”。“make it more clear”应改为“make it clearer”，使用比较级形式更符合表达习惯。