Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“looking myself”应为“looking at myself”，“before my go out”应为“before I go out”。建议注意主谓一致和介词的正确使用，同时简化表达，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Actually, I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because I don't think I'm very handsome. However, I usually check my appearance once a day before I go out to make sure everything looks fine.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I haven't bought any mirrors yet. But my sister often buys mirrors to use when she does her makeup.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“Note I don't”应为“No, I don't”，以及“where I was in an elevator”表达不清。建议使用更简洁明了的句子，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. But sometimes, I check my reflection in the elevator mirror to make sure I look neat.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议理清句子结构，正确使用冠词和介词，并更清楚地解释文化背景。

例: No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room because in China, putting a mirror in the bedroom is considered bad luck. Therefore, we usually place mirrors in the bathroom instead.

× Actually I don't like looking myself in the mirror because I'm not so handsome, but I will look in the mirror once a day because before my go out I will check out where whether my appearance has sound.

✓ Actually I don't like looking at myself in the mirror because I'm not so handsome, but I will look in the mirror once a day because before I go out I will check whether my appearance is okay.

这里“looking myself”缺少介词“at”，正确表达是“looking at myself”。另外，“before my go out”中的“my”应改为“I”，因为主语是第一人称。建议记住动词“look”后面常跟介词“at”表示“看着某人/某物”，以及主语和物主代词的正确使用。

× No I haven't bought any mirrors yet but my my sister always like buying some mirrors to make up or.

✓ No, I haven't bought any mirrors yet but my sister always likes buying some mirrors to do makeup.

“my my sister”重复，应去掉一个“my”。“like”应与第三人称单数主语“my sister”一致，改为“likes”。“to make up or”表达不完整，改为“to do makeup”更准确。建议注意主谓一致和表达完整性。

× Note I don't, but I will look in the mirror where I was in an elevator to make sure my appearance is relatively neat.

✓ No, I don't, but I will look in the mirror when I am in an elevator to make sure my appearance is relatively neat.

“Note I don't”应为“No, I don't”。“where I was in an elevator”表达不当，改为“when I am in an elevator”更符合时间状语的用法。建议注意否定回答的正确表达和时间状语从句的使用。

× No, I don't use mirror to decorate my room because in China use mirror. Put a mirror in your room is a symbol of unlock, so we often put the mirrors in the washroom.

✓ No, I don't use mirrors to decorate my room because in China, using mirrors is considered unlucky. Putting a mirror in your room is a symbol of bad luck, so we often put mirrors in the washroom.

“use mirror”应为复数“use mirrors”。“in China use mirror”缺少主语和谓语，改为“in China, using mirrors is considered unlucky”。“Put a mirror in your room is a symbol of unlock”表达错误，改为“Putting a mirror in your room is a symbol of bad luck”。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，以及句子结构的完整性。