Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: この回答は文法的に不自然で、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、"Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror quite often because it helps me check my appearance before meeting people."のように簡潔で明確な文を使いましょう。

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror quite often because it helps me check my appearance before meeting people. For example, I make sure my hair and clothes look neat before going out.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に対して簡潔に答え、理由や状況を具体的に説明しましょう。例えば、"Yes, I have bought mirrors three times because I need them for my room and sometimes I help my sister buy one."のように表現すると良いです。

例: Yes, I have bought mirrors three times because I need them for my room. Also, I helped my sister buy a mirror once because she needed one for her bedroom.

提案: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。より自然な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、"No, I don't usually carry a mirror because I use my phone's camera to check my appearance when needed."のように言えます。

例: No, I don't usually carry a mirror because I use my phone's camera to check my appearance when needed. It's more convenient and always with me.

提案: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。簡潔で明確な文を使い、具体的な例を加えましょう。例えば、"Yes, I often use mirrors to decorate my room. Sometimes I put stickers on them and hang them on the wall or place them on a table to enhance the room's design."のように表現できます。

例: Yes, I often use mirrors to decorate my room. Sometimes I put stickers on them and hang them on the wall or place them on a table to enhance the room's design.

× Quite often it is because my parents do matter on the office or I do work.

✓ Quite often, it is because my parents work at the office or I am working.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. 'Do matter on the office' is incorrect; it should be 'work at the office'. Also, 'I do work' is awkward; 'I am working' fits better here. Improving sentence structure clarifies meaning.

× Since I've been new apart, I've been a person who always, always guide the customer and do they do face to face interaction so I should.

✓ Since I have been new here, I have always guided customers and done face-to-face interactions as I should.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'New apart' is incorrect; 'new here' is appropriate. 'Guide the customer' should be 'guided customers' to match past tense. 'Do they do face to face interaction' is incorrect; it should be 'done face-to-face interactions'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yeah, I have bought mirrors about three times before.

✓ Yeah, I have bought mirrors about three times before.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× Like it is because I since I have to use, I have to use it by myself and also I have to run to my sister because she has inserted me to buy mirror for her.

✓ It's because I have to use it myself, and also I have to go to my sister because she asked me to buy a mirror for her.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word choice. 'Inserted me to buy mirror' is incorrect; 'asked me to buy a mirror' is correct. 'Run to my sister' is better expressed as 'go to my sister'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× She's a person, trained person. He used to look also a lot.

✓ She is a trained person. She also used to look a lot.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrect when referring to 'She'. Consistent pronouns must be used. Also, 'a person, trained person' is redundant; 'a trained person' suffices.

× No, I do not take mirror with me or it is because we it is because I have a phone.

✓ No, I do not take a mirror with me because I have a phone.

'Mirror' should be singular with an article 'a' when referring to one mirror. The phrase 'or it is because we it is because' is redundant and confusing; simplified to 'because'.

× If, if it's necessary to look me about my appearance, I will go to the camera app on the phone and just look over there.

✓ If it's necessary to check my appearance, I will open the camera app on my phone and look there.

'Look me about my appearance' is incorrect; 'check my appearance' is appropriate. 'Go to the camera app' is better expressed as 'open the camera app'. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So it's very convinced not not to not to use mirror instead of using phone.

✓ So it's very convenient to use the phone instead of a mirror.

'Convinced' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'convenient'. The sentence is simplified and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Absolutely. I I often use mirrors to decorate my integrate my room.

✓ Absolutely. I often use mirrors to decorate and integrate my room.

The phrase 'decorate my integrate my room' is incorrect. It should be 'decorate and integrate my room' to connect the two actions properly.

× So even I sometimes put a sticker on mirrors and hang it over the wall and sometimes I place it on the table.

✓ Sometimes, I put stickers on mirrors and hang them on the wall, and sometimes I place them on the table.

'Even I sometimes' is awkward; 'Sometimes' is sufficient. 'Sticker on mirrors' should be plural 'stickers on mirrors' if multiple, and pronouns 'it' should agree in number with 'mirrors' as 'them'.

× It depends on the the appearance.

✓ It depends on the appearance.

There is a repeated definite article 'the the'. Only one 'the' is needed.

× I want to make a design I prefer for my room and I have been decoring it since Salute.

✓ I want to create a design I prefer for my room, and I have been decorating it since Salute.

'Make a design' is better expressed as 'create a design'. 'Decoring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'decorating'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.