Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感，如用confident替代unconvident。同时，回答应更连贯，避免语义不清。

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror, especially when I am putting on makeup because it helps me apply it correctly. However, sometimes I avoid looking at the mirror when I feel less confident about my appearance.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如'have'应为'has'，'care'应为'can'，'rice place'应为'right place'。建议注意时态和拼写，句子应简洁明了。

例: Yes, I have bought a mirror with lighting features because it helps me apply my makeup in the right place.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如'haven't any space'应为'don't have space'，句子结构较复杂且不够流畅。建议使用简单句表达原因，并注意冠词和词汇的正确使用。

例: Honestly, no. My mirror at home is very big, so I don't have space to carry it with me. I prefer to bring other essentials like my laptop or mobile phone.

提案: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱，存在词汇错误，如'fluffy doors'和'river'应为'mirrors'。建议直接回答问题，表达清晰，避免无关内容。

例: No, I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my room. I prefer other decorations like posters or paintings that reflect my interests.

× Yes I like looking at myself in the mirror especially when I go to make up because it can help me to ensure I have make on the right place.

✓ Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror especially when I go to do makeup because it can help me to ensure I have makeup in the right place.

这里的错误是动词形式错误，'make' 应该用名词 'makeup' 或者动词短语 'do makeup'。'make' 作为动词时需要搭配适当的宾语和形式。建议使用 'do makeup' 表示化妆。

× Yes I like looking at myself in the mirror especially when I go to make up because it can help me to ensure I have make on the right place.

✓ Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror especially when I go to do makeup because it can help me to ensure I have makeup in the right place.

介词使用错误，'on the right place' 应改为 'in the right place'，因为表示位置时，'in' 更合适。

× Also where I was more I don't like look at the mirror because I think I'm so ugly and and unconvident in this time.

✓ Also, when I am sad, I don't like to look at the mirror because I think I'm so ugly and unconfident at that time.

代词和表达错误，'where I was more' 不通顺，应改为 'when I am sad'；'unconvident' 拼写错误，应为 'unconfident'；'in this time' 应改为 'at that time'。

× Yes, I have bought a mirror which have lighting features because the lighting feature care help me to ensure I can do my make up with in the rice place.

✓ Yes, I have bought a mirror which has lighting features because the lighting features can help me to ensure I can do my makeup in the right place.

动词形式错误，'have' 应为第三人称单数 'has'；'care' 拼写错误，应为 'can'；'make up' 应为名词 'makeup'；'with in the rice place' 拼写和介词错误，应为 'in the right place'。

× Yes, I have bought a mirror which have lighting features because the lighting feature care help me to ensure I can do my make up with in the rice place.

✓ Yes, I have bought a mirror which has lighting features because the lighting features can help me to ensure I can do my makeup in the right place.

主谓一致错误，'which have' 中 'have' 应改为 'has'，因为先行词是单数 'mirror'。

× Yes, I have bought a mirror which have lighting features because the lighting feature care help me to ensure I can do my make up with in the rice place.

✓ Yes, I have bought a mirror which has lighting features because the lighting features can help me to ensure I can do my makeup in the right place.

介词错误，'with in the rice place' 应为 'in the right place'，'right' 拼写错误，且介词 'in' 用于表示位置。

× Honestly no, because my mirror in my home is very big, therefore I haven't any space for bringing it in order to bring other necessary, for example laptop or mobile phone.

✓ Honestly no, because my mirror at home is very big, therefore I don't have any space to bring it in order to bring other necessities, for example, a laptop or a mobile phone.

单复数错误，'necessary' 应为复数 'necessities'；'haven't any space' 应为 'don't have any space'。

× Honestly no, because my mirror in my home is very big, therefore I haven't any space for bringing it in order to bring other necessary, for example laptop or mobile phone.

✓ Honestly no, because my mirror at home is very big, therefore I don't have any space to bring it in order to bring other necessities, for example, a laptop or a mobile phone.

介词错误，'in my home' 更自然的表达是 'at home'。

× Honestly no, because my mirror in my home is very big, therefore I haven't any space for bringing it in order to bring other necessary, for example laptop or mobile phone.

✓ Honestly no, because my mirror at home is very big, therefore I don't have any space to bring it in order to bring other necessities, for example, a laptop or a mobile phone.

量词使用错误，'other necessary' 应为 'other necessities'，表示其他必需品。

× Only thing no are people use different fluffy doors to decorate my room for example like G cover which is the popular circus tour in Hong Kong and also I think river is not the best choice for me to decorate my home.

✓ No, people use different fluffy doors to decorate my room, for example, like G cover which is a popular circus tour in Hong Kong, and also I think a mirror is not the best choice for me to decorate my home.

代词和词汇错误，'Only thing no are people use' 语序错误，应改为 'No, people use'；'river' 拼写错误，应为 'mirror'；缺少冠词 'a popular circus tour'。

× Only thing no are people use different fluffy doors to decorate my room for example like G cover which is the popular circus tour in Hong Kong and also I think river is not the best choice for me to decorate my home.

✓ No, people use different fluffy doors to decorate my room, for example, like G cover which is a popular circus tour in Hong Kong, and also I think a mirror is not the best choice for me to decorate my home.

冠词使用错误，'the popular circus tour' 应为 'a popular circus tour'，表示泛指。