Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use 'I' consistently instead of switching to 'yourself'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by avoiding repeated phrases like 'it helps to'.

例: Yes, I like looking at myself in the mirror, especially when I wear a new dress, because it boosts my confidence.

提案: Use the correct tense and avoid redundancy. Instead of 'I often bought', say 'I often buy' or 'I have bought'. Also, clarify your meaning about buying mirrors for your purse.

例: Yes, I often buy mirrors. I have bought some to decorate my house and a small one to carry in my purse.

提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'because of when I'm out from my home'. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

例: Yes, I usually take a mirror with me because when I'm out, I can check my outfit to see if I look good.

提案: Use plural forms correctly and avoid repetition. Instead of 'more more beautiful', say 'more beautiful'. Also, provide a clear reason with linking words.

例: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because they make the space look bigger and more beautiful.

× Yes, of course, I like to look at yourself in the mirror because it helps to so it helps to increase my personality when I wore a new dress.

✓ Yes, of course, I like to look at myself in the mirror because it helps to increase my personality when I wear a new dress.

The pronoun 'yourself' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves, so the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used. Also, 'wore' should be 'wear' to match the present tense context of liking to look at oneself when wearing a new dress.

× Yes Sir, I often bought mirrors.

✓ Yes Sir, I often buy mirrors.

The adverb 'often' indicates a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'buy' instead of the past tense 'bought'. Using 'bought' suggests a completed action rather than a habitual one.

× I bought mirrors for my house to decorate it and as well as I bought it for my purse also.

✓ I bought mirrors for my house to decorate it, and I also bought one for my purse.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'mirrors' which is plural; 'one' should be used to refer to a single mirror for the purse. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma and rephrasing for clarity.

× Yes of course, I usually take a mirror with me because of when I'm out from my home I can just check my outfit in, mirror it I'm looking good or not.

✓ Yes, of course, I usually take a mirror with me because when I'm out of my home, I can just check my outfit in the mirror to see if I'm looking good or not.

The phrase 'because of when' is incorrect; it should be 'because when'. Also, 'out from my home' should be 'out of my home'. The phrase 'in, mirror it' is incorrect and should be 'in the mirror'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, I will use mirror to decorate my home.

✓ Yes, I will use mirrors to decorate my home.

The noun 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' because generally multiple mirrors are used for decoration, and it matches the context of the following sentence.

× When I decorate my room with the mirror, it looks bigger and more more beautiful.

✓ When I decorate my room with mirrors, it looks bigger and more beautiful.

The word 'more' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' to be consistent with the previous correction. The sentence is corrected to remove redundancy and ensure proper plural usage.