Mirrors— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегая излишней сложности. Также улучшите связность, используя связующие слова.

例: I usually look at myself in the mirror every morning when I am in the bathroom and just before I go out. Although I feel comfortable, I don't particularly like looking at myself.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Используйте более простые и правильные предложения, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и естественным.

例: I have never bought a mirror myself because I still live with my parents, and they buy one if we need it.

提案: Ответ хороший, но есть небольшие ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Попробуйте использовать более естественные выражения и улучшить связность.

例: I have never taken a mirror with me because I don't have one. However, I always carry my phone, which has a camera, so I can use it to look at myself if needed.

提案: Ответ достаточно хороший, но можно сделать его более естественным и плавным, используя более подходящие выражения и связующие слова.

例: I wouldn't use mirrors to decorate my living room because, in my opinion, they look scary at twilight and make me feel uncomfortable at night.

× I usually look at myself in the mirror early in the morning when I am in bathroom and just before go out.

✓ I usually look at myself in the mirror early in the morning when I am in the bathroom and just before going out.

The phrase 'in bathroom' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'bathroom', which is necessary because 'bathroom' is a singular, countable noun. Also, 'just before go out' is incorrect; it should be 'just before going out' because after 'before' a gerund (-ing form) is required.

× I have never bought mirrors by myself because I have been living with my parents yet so they did it if it was in need.

✓ I have never bought mirrors by myself because I have been living with my parents yet, so they did it if it was needed.

The phrase 'if it was in need' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'if it was needed' to indicate necessity in the past. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× Actually, I have never taken a mirror with myself because I even haven't one.

✓ Actually, I have never taken a mirror with me because I don't even have one.

The phrase 'taken a mirror with myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'me' in this context. Also, 'I even haven't one' is ungrammatical; the correct form is 'I don't even have one' to express possession.

× Nevertheless, my phone is always with me and it has camera, so if I want to look at myself I can do it using my phone.

✓ Nevertheless, my phone is always with me and it has a camera, so if I want to look at myself, I can do it using my phone.

The phrase 'it has camera' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'camera' because 'camera' is a singular countable noun. Also, a comma is needed after 'myself' to separate the clauses.

× I would never use mirrors to decorate my living room because from my point of view, mirrors are scary in twilight and at night they make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I would never use mirrors to decorate my living room because, from my point of view, mirrors are scary at twilight and at night they make me feel uncomfortable.

The phrase 'scary in twilight' should be 'scary at twilight' because 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate specific times of day.