Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ ràng rằng bạn thường không nhớ giấc mơ và giải thích lý do một cách ngắn gọn.

例: I usually don't remember my dreams because I tend to forget them as soon as I wake up. Even if the dreams are interesting, they quickly fade from my memory.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy chú ý sử dụng từ đúng (ví dụ: 'dreams' thay vì 'stream'), tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I usually don't share my dreams because I can't remember them well. However, I am very interested in my friends' and sister's dreams because they always tell me about them, and I find their stories fascinating.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc và có lỗi ngắt quãng. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời tránh các câu ngắt quãng không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings. They can sometimes predict the future or reflect interesting events in our lives, but in a more imaginative way.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, of course. Like everyone else, my dream is to become successful and to travel around the world with my family. Although it seems difficult, I am working hard every day to make it come true.

× From my experience, I don't really remember the dreams you had.

✓ From my experience, I don't really remember the dreams I had.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker's own dreams, not the examiner's.

× Even when the dreams are really interesting, I often forget as soon as I get up, so I don't usually remember the. Content of my dreams.

✓ Even when the dreams are really interesting, I often forget them as soon as I get up, so I don't usually remember the content of my dreams.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the object 'them' after 'forget'. Also, 'Content' should not be capitalized and should be connected to the previous sentence.

× Because I do don't usually remember my dreams, I cannot share it with others.

✓ Because I don't usually remember my dreams, I cannot share them with others.

The phrase 'do don't' is incorrect; it should be 'don't'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'dreams'.

× But I think I'm really interested in other stream because whenever that my friends or my sister sister dream they always. Talk to me and it's really interesting.

✓ But I think I'm really interested in other streams because whenever my friends or my sister dream, they always talk to me and it's really interesting.

The word 'stream' should be plural 'streams' to match 'other'. Also, 'sister sister' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'sister'. The sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary words.

× Yes, of course, as everyone alive, my dreams is to become successful and to explore, to travel around the world with my family.

✓ Yes, of course, like everyone alive, my dream is to become successful and to explore, to travel around the world with my family.

The phrase 'as everyone alive' is better expressed as 'like everyone alive'. 'Dreams' should be singular 'dream' to match the singular verb 'is'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement.