Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, use 'they are vivid' instead of 'it is vivid'.

例: Sometimes I remember my dreams, especially when they are vivid or unusual; however, I usually forget them shortly after waking up.

提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: When I have an unusual dream, I usually share it with my mother to tell her about my experience and how I felt.

提案: Improve sentence structure and word choice for clarity. For example, use 'simply a reflection' instead of 'simply or reflection'. Also, use linking words like 'for instance' to introduce examples.

例: In my opinion, dreams don't have special meanings; they are simply a reflection of memories and thoughts from the day. For instance, if I am worried about something, I might have a nightmare, but it doesn't have any deeper meaning.

提案: Ensure tense consistency; use present tense 'give' instead of past 'gave' when talking about ongoing effects. Also, you can add linking words to enhance coherence.

例: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me a sense of purpose and motivation.

× Sometimes I tend to remember my dreams, especially when it is vivid or unusual.

✓ Sometimes I tend to remember my dreams, especially when they are vivid or unusual.

The subject 'dreams' is plural, so the verb and pronoun should also be plural. 'It is' should be changed to 'they are' to agree with the plural noun 'dreams'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× When my dream is unusual, I mostly sure that dream with my mother to share my experience with her how I felt.

✓ When my dream is unusual, I mostly share that dream with my mother to share my experience with her about how I felt.

The original sentence has a missing verb 'share' after 'mostly'. Also, 'that dream' is singular and correct here, but the phrase 'mostly sure that dream' is incorrect. The correction adds the verb 'share' to fix the sentence structure. This is a singular and plural issue combined with sentence structure.

× Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they gave me a sense of purpose and motivation.

✓ Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they give me a sense of purpose and motivation.

The verb 'gave' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is present tense ('I want'). The verb should be 'give' to match the present tense. This is a past tense issue.