Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，如“for their importance”应改为“because of their importance”。建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性，避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I had many dreams when I was a child. For example, I really wanted to become a doctor because of their importance and the positive impact they have on society. I think this job is really meaningful to me.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误，如“drinks”应为“dreams”，且句子较长且缺少适当的连接词，导致表达不够清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always give me support and encouragement, which makes me feel very touched. Moreover, sharing our dreams helps us stay motivated and strengthens our friendships.

提案: 回答中出现了词汇错误，“Icing drinks”应为“Dreams”，影响了表达的准确性。建议注意词汇的正确使用，并且可以增加更多具体细节来丰富内容。

例: Absolutely. Dreams have special meanings because they represent our deepest aspirations and goals. For example, having a clear dream can motivate people to overcome obstacles and keep pursuing their passions even during difficult times.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“will be succeed”应为“will succeed”，且表达略显简单。建议注意语法准确性，并尝试使用更丰富的词汇和句型。

例: Yes, I really want to make my dream come true because it is very important to me. Although it is quite challenging since I need to improve my speaking and listening skills and gain work experience, I believe that with hard work, I will succeed in the future.

× I really wanted to become a doctor for their importance and the positive impact they have on society.

✓ I really wanted to become a doctor because of its importance and the positive impact it has on society.

这里的主语是单数的“a doctor”，所以后面的代词和动词也应该用单数形式。原句中使用了复数代词“their”和动词“have”，与单数主语不一致，应该改为单数形式“its”和“has”。

× I usually share my drinks with my best friends because they always give me support and encouragement which made me very touched and sharing our dreams can help us stay motivated and strengthens our friendships.

✓ I usually share my dreams with my best friends because they always give me support and encouragement, which makes me very touched. Sharing our dreams can help us stay motivated and strengthen our friendships.

原句中“drinks”应为“dreams”，且“which made me very touched”时态不一致，应改为“which makes me very touched”。此外，“strengthens”应改为“strengthen”，因为主语是复数“sharing our dreams”。

× Icing drinks have special meanings because they represent our deepest aspiration and goals.

✓ Dreams have special meanings because they represent our deepest aspirations and goals.

原句中“icing drinks”应为“dreams”，且“aspiration”应为复数形式“aspirations”，与“goals”保持一致。

× I believe that after working hard, I will be succeed in the future.

✓ I believe that after working hard, I will succeed in the future.

“will be succeed”是错误的结构，正确的用法是“will succeed”，因为“succeed”是动词原形，助动词“will”后直接跟动词原形。