Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答比较自然，但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I can sometimes remember my dreams clearly, especially when they involve someone I care about. For example, I once dreamed about my crush, and he looked very handsome. I thought about that dream for a long time afterwards.

提案: 回答简洁但缺少细节和连接词。建议增加原因说明，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更完整。

例: I seldom share my dreams with others because I think they are unrealistic and have no practical meaning. Therefore, I prefer to keep them to myself.

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子，但表达稍显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings, especially psychologically. For example, dreaming about losing your teeth might indicate that you are experiencing important changes in your life.

提案: 回答中有口语填充词“umm”，建议避免使用。句子结构可以更简洁，且注意冠词使用。

例: I rarely want to make my dreams come true because I find them unrealistic. Sometimes, I dream about living in an upside-down world, which is quite scary.

× I once dreamed one of my crushes and he was so handsome, so I thought about it after having the whole dream.

✓ I once dreamed about one of my crushes and he was so handsome, so I thought about it after having the whole dream.

The verb 'dreamed' should be followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to the content of the dream. The original sentence missed the preposition, which is necessary to correctly express the idea of dreaming about someone.

× I seldom share my dreams with others because I find it quite unrealistic and has no practical meaning.

✓ I seldom share my dreams with others because I find them quite unrealistic and having no practical meaning.

The subject 'dreams' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it should be 'them' instead of 'it'. Also, the verb phrase 'has no practical meaning' should be adjusted to agree with the plural subject or rephrased to maintain grammatical consistency.

× I believe dreams have special meanings, especially in psychological level.

✓ I believe dreams have special meanings, especially on a psychological level.

The correct preposition to use with 'level' in this context is 'on', and it is necessary to include the article 'a' before 'psychological level' to make the phrase grammatically correct.

× I often dream about living in a upside down world which is quite scary.

✓ I often dream about living in an upside down world which is quite scary.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'upside'. Using 'an' ensures correct pronunciation and grammatical correctness.