Dreams— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不够准确，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并适当使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: In my childhood, my dream was to become a teacher because I thought teachers had many vacations. However, now I want to be a chemist since it relates to my major, and I hope to dedicate myself to medical research in the future.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的准确性，避免断句不当，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I shared my childhood dreams with my family, and they supported me at that time. Now, I still share my dreams with them because I want them to understand my future plans and not worry about me.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不够清晰，建议丰富内容，具体说明梦想的意义，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Of course, I believe dreams have special meanings because they motivate us to improve ourselves and achieve our goals, reflecting our personal growth.

提案: 回答与上一题重复，缺乏新内容。建议避免重复，提供新的观点或具体计划，表达更自然流畅。

例: Definitely, I want to make my dreams come true because they inspire me to work hard and become a better person over time.

× my dream is to be a teacher because I think teacher has many vacations.

✓ my dream is to be a teacher because I think teachers have many vacations.

这里的teacher是复数，表示所有老师，所以应该用复数形式teachers，动词也要用复数have。

× teacher has many vacations.

✓ teachers have many vacations.

主语teachers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式have，而不是单数has。

× I shared my dream when I was a child with my family.

✓ I shared my dream with my family when I was a child.

句子中时态使用正确，但语序调整更自然。

× I want them to know what I will do in the future and let them, don't worry.

✓ I want them to know what I will do in the future so that they don't worry.

原句中and let them, don't worry结构不正确，应使用so that引导目的状语从句，表达“为了让他们不担心”。

× Dreams can make me life better and witness the growth of me.

✓ Dreams can make my life better and witness my growth.

me是宾格，作定语时应使用my；witness后面应接名词短语my growth，而不是the growth of me。