Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思不清晰。建议练习简洁明了地表达观点，注意句子结构和时态的正确使用。

例: Yes, I often send emails, especially to my professors at college when I have questions about my courses.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺乏清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体例子或原因进行补充。

例: I usually send emails to my professors when I have questions about my subjects or need clarification on assignments.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，语法错误较多，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I don't think emails are very popular in China because most people use an app called WeChat, which is more convenient and allows instant messaging.

提案: 回答内容自相矛盾且表达混乱，缺乏逻辑性。建议先明确观点，然后用具体理由支持，并注意句子结构的完整性。

例: I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because many people prefer instant messaging apps, which are faster and more convenient.

× Emails but the in the College in some relation that have to communicate with math professor with sending emails and they often there there mean. The.

✓ I send emails in college to communicate with my math professor, and they often reply.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓宾的清晰表达，导致句子难以理解。建议理清句子结构，明确主语、谓语和宾语，使句子通顺。

× Questions and problems of my subjects and the task will send emails to my professors that. Let's check my test test test tasks detailed.

✓ I send emails to my professors about questions and problems related to my subjects and tasks. I also check my test tasks in detail.

原句缺少谓语，句子不完整，且表达不清晰。建议补充完整的谓语动词，分开表达不同的意思，使句子完整且易懂。

× I don't think the e-mail says popular in China because we always use the application called the Rich at which is more convenient for people and almost every people use it in China it can it can see messages in time.

✓ I don't think email is popular in China because we always use an application called WeChat, which is more convenient for people, and almost everyone uses it in China. It allows people to see messages in real time.

原句中“almost every people”用法错误，应为“almost everyone”。另外，句子冗长且缺少标点，建议分句表达，使用正确的量词和代词。

× Will be more popular in the future and I think it will be. It will be gave up by by population because it's really inconvenient and some people won't want to come back to check check check the e-mail boxes. It's non mainstream, way too associated with.

✓ Sending emails will be more popular in the future, but I think it will be given up by the population because it's really inconvenient, and some people won't want to check their email boxes. It's a non-mainstream method nowadays.

原句中“will be gave up”错误，正确应为“will be given up”，这是被动语态的过去分词形式。句子结构不完整，需补充主语和调整表达，使句子完整且语法正确。