Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“other more convenient way”应为“other more convenient ways”，且“we chat”应为“WeChat”。建议注意语法和专有名词的正确使用，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

例: No, I don't often send emails because in China, people usually use more convenient ways to communicate, such as WeChat.

提案: 回答结构清晰，使用了连接词“therefore”，内容具体。但可以增加更多细节，如举例说明重要事项的类型，使回答更丰富。

例: I usually send emails in the evening because people are free from work or study then. Therefore, it's a good time to discuss important matters, such as project updates or meeting arrangements, without interruptions.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，“send emails used to be”应为“sending emails used to be”，且“We Chat”应为“WeChat”。建议注意动名词的使用和专有名词拼写，同时回答可以更自然流畅。

例: Sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China. However, nowadays, people prefer using instant messaging apps like WeChat.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“send the emails”应为“sending emails”，“becauses”应为“because”。建议注意动名词和连词的正确使用，同时可以增加预测的具体原因，使回答更有说服力。

例: I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient, such as instant messaging and video calls.

× Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient way to communicate such as we chat.

✓ Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient ways to communicate such as WeChat.

这里的“way”应该用复数形式“ways”，因为前面用了“other”，表示多种方式。中文解释：当表示多种方式时，名词应使用复数形式。

× Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient way to communicate such as we chat.

✓ Well, I don't often send emails because in China we usually use other more convenient ways to communicate, such as WeChat.

“such as”前面应加逗号，且“WeChat”是专有名词，首字母应大写。中文解释：列举时“such as”前应加逗号，专有名词首字母需大写。

× Well, send emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.

✓ Well, sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.

这里“send emails”应改为动名词形式“sending emails”，表示动作的名词化。中文解释：动词作主语时应使用动名词形式。

× Well, send emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.

✓ Well, sending emails used to be a very popular way to communicate in China.

“send”应改为动名词“sending”，表示动作的名词形式。中文解释：动词作主语时应使用动名词形式。

× Well I think send the emails will be less popular in the future becauses nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.

✓ Well, I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.

“send the emails”应改为动名词“sending emails”，且“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。中文解释：动词作主语时用动名词，拼写错误需纠正。

× Well I think send the emails will be less popular in the future becauses nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.

✓ Well, I think sending emails will be less popular in the future because nowadays there are many communication apps that are faster and more convenient than emails.

句首“Well”后应加逗号，且“because”拼写错误。中文解释：句首插入语后应加逗号，拼写错误需纠正。