Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'emails' and 'communication' multiple times, you can combine ideas smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I often send emails because I prefer written communication over phone calls, as it allows me to respond thoughtfully and keep a record of conversations.

提案: Make sure to answer directly and clearly. Avoid using 'you' when referring to yourself. Also, use linking words to clarify the time frame and provide a more natural response.

例: I usually send emails during working hours, specifically from 7:00 AM when I arrive at the office until 1:00 PM when I leave.

提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and repetitive. Try to be more specific about the popularity of emails in China and use linking words to contrast or compare. Avoid general statements that apply globally without focusing on China.

例: Yes, sending emails is very popular in China, especially among professionals and students, although instant messaging apps are also widely used for quick communication.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by providing reasons and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid using 'should' when expressing predictions; use 'will' instead for certainty.

例: I believe emails will become more popular in the future because they provide a written record and are more convenient than phone calls for handling requests and inquiries.

× I don't like to do much of phone calls.

✓ I don't like to make many phone calls.

The phrase 'much of phone calls' is incorrect because 'phone calls' is a countable noun and should be quantified with 'many' instead of 'much'. Also, the verb 'do' is not appropriate here; 'make' is the correct verb collocated with 'phone calls'.

× My favorite way of communication is through emails sending and receiving.

✓ My favorite way of communication is sending and receiving emails.

The phrase 'emails sending and receiving' is awkward and incorrect. The gerunds 'sending and receiving' should come before the noun 'emails' to form a correct phrase. Also, 'way of communication' is correct but the phrase following it should be structured properly.

× If you are in working hours, I send emails from that time I reach office at 7:00 AM to the time I leave office at 1:00 PM.

✓ During working hours, I send emails from the time I reach the office at 7:00 AM to the time I leave the office at 1:00 PM.

The phrase 'If you are in working hours' is incorrect; 'During working hours' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'reach office' and 'leave office' need the definite article 'the' before 'office'.

× All countries are communicating through e-mail messages.

✓ All countries communicate through e-mail messages.

The present continuous tense 'are communicating' is not appropriate here for a general fact; simple present 'communicate' is better. Also, 'through e-mail messages' is correct but the verb tense needed correction.

× I think e-mail messages should be more popular in the future.

✓ I think e-mail messages will be more popular in the future.

The modal verb 'should' implies obligation or recommendation, which is not suitable here. To express a future prediction, 'will' is the correct modal verb.

× People should not rely on phone calls to receive their requests or to send their inquiries.

✓ People will not rely on phone calls to receive their requests or to send their inquiries.

Again, 'should' implies obligation or advice, but the sentence is predicting future behavior, so 'will' is more appropriate.