Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal belirsizlikler var. "some work stuffs" ifadesi yanlış ve gereksiz tekrarlar mevcut. Daha doğal ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha net ve doğrudan yapmalısınız.

例: Yes, I often use emails for work purposes, but when I want to communicate with my friends, I prefer using social media applications.

提案: Cevabınız kısa ve net, ancak daha fazla detay ekleyerek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, zaman ifadesini daha doğru kullanmalısınız.

例: I last sent an email two months ago during my immigration process because I needed to submit important documents.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "used to some some" ifadesi yanlış. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha açıklayıcı ve detaylı yapmalısınız.

例: No, sending emails is not very popular in China because most people prefer using social media apps for communication.

提案: Cümlenizde zaman kullanımı ve kelime seçimi hataları var. "there will be no sending emails" ifadesi doğal değil. Cevabınızı daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla destekleyin.

例: I believe that people used to send more emails in the past, but nowadays they use various applications, so in the future, email might become less popular.

× Yes, actually I use it for my some work stuffs and but when I want to communicate with my friends I prefer some application for entertainment.

✓ Yes, actually I use it for some of my work stuff, but when I want to communicate with my friends, I prefer some applications for entertainment.

The phrase 'my some work stuffs' is incorrect. 'Some' should come before 'work stuff' and 'stuff' is uncountable, so 'stuffs' is incorrect. Also, 'some application' should be plural 'some applications' because it refers to multiple apps. The conjunction 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed. Commas are added for clarity.

× Well, it was two months ago for my immigration process.

✓ Well, it was two months ago during my immigration process.

The phrase 'for my immigration process' is awkward. 'During' is a better preposition to indicate the time period when the event happened. The sentence is otherwise correct in past tense.

× No, it's not popular in China. People generally used to some some social media apps mostly.

✓ No, it's not popular in China. People generally use some social media apps mostly.

The phrase 'used to some some social media apps' is incorrect. 'Used to' implies past habit, but the context suggests present habit, so 'use' is correct. Also, 'some some' is a repetition error. The sentence is corrected to present tense with proper quantifier usage.

× I think people used to send an e-mail more in the past, but nowadays people use a variety of application for it and I think in the future there will be no sending emails.

✓ I think people used to send emails more in the past, but nowadays people use a variety of applications for it, and I think in the future there will be no sending of emails.

'An e-mail' should be plural 'emails' to indicate general practice. 'A variety of application' should be 'a variety of applications' because 'variety of' is followed by plural noun. The phrase 'there will be no sending emails' is awkward; 'there will be no sending of emails' is more natural. Commas are added for clarity.