Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I often send emails because I am a university student and need to communicate with my professors, asking questions or discussing my ideas.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I send emails when I have questions or topics to discuss, especially to my professors for academic inquiries.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子结构稍显复杂，建议简化句子并使用连接词提高流畅度。

例: Sending emails is not very popular in China because people prefer using apps like WeChat, QQ, or TikTok to communicate.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，注意语法和用词准确性。

例: I think emails will become less popular in the future because people prefer using apps like WeChat and QQ for communication.

× I need to send e-mail to communicate with my professor, sometimes to ask them questions and or talk with them about my ideas.

✓ I need to send emails to communicate with my professors, sometimes to ask them questions or talk with them about my ideas.

“e-mail”应使用复数形式“emails”，因为这里指的是多封邮件；“professor”应使用复数形式“professors”，因为“them”指代多位教授。

× sometimes to ask them questions and or talk with them about my ideas.

✓ sometimes to ask them questions or talk with them about my ideas.

“and or”是错误的连词搭配，应使用“or”表示选择关系。

× I would like to also send e-mail to them.

✓ I would also like to send emails to them.

“e-mail”应使用复数形式“emails”，因为这里指的是多封邮件。

× I don't think sending e-mail is very popular in China since there nowadays there are many communication tools in China such as WeChat, QQ or Tiktok.

✓ I don't think sending emails is very popular in China since nowadays there are many communication tools in China such as WeChat, QQ or TikTok.

“e-mail”应使用复数形式“emails”；“Tiktok”应为正确拼写“TikTok”。

× since nowadays people might more keen to use the WeChat QQ or some other communication tool to communicate with others, so they would not worry keen to use the e-mail to chat with others.

✓ since nowadays people might be more keen to use WeChat, QQ or some other communication tools to communicate with others, so they would not be keen to use email to chat with others.

“might more keen”缺少助动词，应为“might be more keen”；“worry keen”表达错误，应为“be keen”；“the e-mail”中“the”不必要，且“e-mail”应统一为“email”；“communication tool”应使用复数“communication tools”。