Emails— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa shizen de, shōjiki ni kotaete imasu ga, fukusū no 'I' ya 'e-mail' no kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni shite, 5 bun no naka de yōryō o tsukatte kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte hanashi o rensō-teki ni shiyō shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I often send emails at work because it is the easiest and most convenient way to communicate with clients. For example, I use emails to share important documents and updates quickly.

提案: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, kotoba no kurikaeshi ya bunpō no fumei-sa ga arimasu. Motto meikaku ni shite, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte, rikai shi yasui hanashi ni shite kudasai. 5 bun ijō ni shinai yō ni ki o tsukete kudasai.

例: I usually send emails for formal purposes, such as asking for feedback from my teacher or contacting organizations. However, I prefer messaging for casual conversations with friends.

提案: Kotae wa fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Tokuni 'designer' ya 'Tina' no imi ga fumei desu. Motto seikaku ni shite, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte, rikai shi yasui hanashi ni shite kudasai. Jōhō wa shōsai ni shite kudasai.

例: I am not sure about the details, but I think emails have been popular in China for many years because they are easy and convenient for communication.

提案: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, kotoba no kurikaeshi ya bunpō no machigai ga arimasu. Motto seikaku ni shite, setsuzoku-go o tsukatte hanashi o rensō-teki ni shite kudasai. 5 bun ijō ni shinai yō ni ki o tsukete kudasai.

例: I believe emails will remain popular in the future because they are easier and more convenient than paper letters. Therefore, companies will continue to use them for communication.

× I have to do the work related to correspondence and the e-mail are the easiest and convenient way to transfer information between the clients and.

✓ I have to do the work related to correspondence and the e-mail is the easiest and most convenient way to transfer information between the clients.

The subject 'e-mail' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'convenient' should be in the superlative form 'most convenient' to match 'easiest'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and adjective usage.

× Well, I always prefer e-mail. Emails when I have to do some some sorts of formal activities or such as when I have to ask or get a review from the teacher or or to some organization, I write e-mail.

✓ Well, I always prefer e-mails when I have to do some sorts of formal activities, such as when I have to ask or get a review from the teacher or from some organization, I write e-mails.

The plural form 'e-mails' is more appropriate when referring to multiple instances. Also, 'some sorts of' is correct but 'some some' is a repetition error. Added 'from' before 'some organization' for correct preposition use.

× I think since e-mail have been very famous throughout the decade and they are very easy and convenient to transfer messages.

✓ I think since e-mail has been very famous throughout the decade and it is very easy and convenient to transfer messages.

The singular noun 'e-mail' requires the singular verb 'has' and singular pronoun 'it' for agreement.

× I I I think Tina is quite famous for e-mail.

✓ I think China is quite famous for e-mail.

'Tina' seems to be a typo for 'China'. Correcting the proper noun to the intended country name.

× I think sending e-mail will be very popular.

✓ I think sending e-mails will be very popular.

Plural 'e-mails' is more natural when referring to the general activity of sending emails. The future tense 'will be' is correct.

× It is because of because they are very easy and convenient and convenient as compared to the paper, paper rugs or letters.

✓ It is because they are very easy and convenient compared to paper, postcards, or letters.

Removed repeated 'because' and 'convenient'. 'Paper rugs' is incorrect; likely meant 'postcards'. Also, 'paper' is uncountable and does not need 'the'.

× So the company will obviously follow it.

✓ So companies will obviously follow it.

Using plural 'companies' is more natural when speaking generally. 'The company' implies a specific company, which is not indicated here.